User talk:Tennis12000/Kyle McDonald (artist)

The article that I do a peer review do really well in explain the detail about Kyle McDonald (Artist). From the article, all of his information was the one impressed me the most. The author using credible source to explain the detail. Author also include " Nut Graph" into his draft to make more clear in the subject. I would suggest the author change the way that the article organize because it help the reader also the audience can have a summary view of what going to happens in the article. It also can help audience just click to the sections that they want to know about. There is also the important of how we can link to another wikipedia link to make the article more discover. Like L.A.T lab, GANs, openFrameworks,.. they all have a wikipedia link so audience can discover more articles. This article could help me apply to my by learn how to find more detail and also find the clear way to describe the subject that I want to shows. PhuongNguyen2212 (talk) 21:01, 15 April 2020 (UTC)