User talk:Teresa Avila

Terry Acebo Davis
Hey! Welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for your edits to Terry Acebo Davis. I've rolled them back for a couple of reasons (don't worry, this doesn't mean they're totally rejected or you can't contribute!)

First, they didn't have inline references (the little [1] and [2] footnotes associating a statement with a particular source). With biographies of living people we try to be very, very careful to ensure that every statement that could be a problem is attributed. Second, it wasn't entirely neutral; saying that Acebo Davis "delicately balances" her two careers may be true but it's a bit more subjective than we usually try for.

This isn't to say the edits weren't good edits - they had a ton of information the article didn't already have I'd love to see included! For example we don't have anything on the artists selected by Acebo Davis in her role as an Arts Commissioner; if you could point me to the source for that statement it would be great to work into the article. Thanks, Ironholds (talk) 12:02, 20 July 2015 (UTC)