User talk:TerryBG

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Mike Salvino (March 15)
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Kichu🐘 Discuss 16:50, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Greg Fleming (businessman) (March 15)
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Kichu🐘 Discuss 17:05, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Rockefeller Capital Management (March 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Kashmorwiki was:

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Kichu🐘 Discuss 17:25, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Greg Fleming (businessman) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Greg Fleming (businessman). Thanks! Fiddle  Faddle  07:57, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Greg Fleming (businessman) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Greg Fleming (businessman). Thanks! Fiddle  Faddle  12:56, 20 March 2021 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Greg Fleming (businessman) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Greg Fleming (businessman). Thanks! Fiddle  Faddle  22:42, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mike Salvino has been accepted
 Mike Salvino, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! Softlavender (talk) 22:12, 24 April 2021 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Greg Fleming (businessman) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Greg Fleming (businessman). Thanks! Hatchens (talk) 04:21, 22 May 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Greg Fleming (businessman) (May 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Timtrent was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Fiddle Timtrent Faddle Talk to me 15:27, 22 May 2021 (UTC)

Nomination of Mike Salvino for deletion
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Mike Salvino is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Articles for deletion/Mike Salvino& until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. Fiddle Timtrent Faddle Talk to me 10:51, 8 June 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Rockefeller Capital Management (June 8)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Timtrent were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Fiddle Timtrent Faddle Talk to me 20:58, 8 June 2021 (UTC)


 * I've made some coments--I think the article can possibly be rescued--as the continuation of the Rockefeller family office it is not run of the mill. SInce I'm interested in this corner of the financial industry, I've decided to edit it. Naturally, I'm removing excessive use of the firm name, details of the board of directors, and unreliable references. If I complete it to my own satisfaction, I'll accept it, and if necessary defend it. If you want to help, remove about half the references--everything not essential to the notability . As I've said, if I'm interested in the subject, I will work with anyone who will work with me. Emphasis on the with/ . (se also my comment on Fleming).  DGG ( talk ) 04:20, 31 August 2021 (UTC)


 * Hi, thank you very much for your assistance on RCM. I see you have already trimmed the article and removed a number of citations.
 * Is there any assistance that I can be? Would you like me to remove further citations?
 * Let me know, and thanks again. TerryBG (talk) 06:31, 31 August 2021 (UTC)


 * I would like you to remove all unnnecessary citations from all. your articles and drafts. If there are several references for aparticular point, keep only the best. If the ref. is a press release, remove it--if there's no other source, consider removing what it references.  DGG ( talk ) 06:48, 31 August 2021 (UTC)


 * Will do, thanks. TerryBG (talk) 06:59, 31 August 2021 (UTC)


 * Hi, I have trimmed the citations further on Draft:Rockefeller Capital Management, so that there is no more than one citation per fact. If or when you are able, please take a look at it and let me know if I may be of any further assistance. Thank you very much. TerryBG (talk) 08:05, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Trimming the citations is all very well, but you need to engage with the advice, not just with the advisor. The quality of the remaining citations is poor. We need quality of reference, not quantity.
 * We require references from significant coverage about the topic of the article, and independent of it, in multiple secondary sources which are WP:RS please. See WP:42. Please also see WP:PRIMARY which details the limited permitted usage of primary sources and WP:SELFPUB which has clear limitations on self published sources. Providing sufficient references, ideally one per fact referred to, that meet these tough criteria is likely to allow this draft to be accepted. Lack of them or an inability to find them is likely to mean that the topic is not suitable for inclusion, certainly today. Fiddle Timtrent  Faddle Talk to me 13:48, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Rockefeller Capital Management has a new comment
<div style="border:solid 1px #9accf6;background:#f1f9ff;padding:1em;padding-top:0.5em;padding-bottom:1em;color:black;margin-bottom: 1.5em;width: 100%;"> I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Rockefeller Capital Management. Thanks! Fiddle Timtrent Faddle Talk to me 13:42, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Rockefeller Capital Management has been accepted
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Greg Fleming (businessman)
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Thanks again, and happy editing!