User talk:Tess3o3/sandbox

Go into details more about the differing treatment of juveniles based on gender in the "Criminal Procedure Code (Act 30) of 1960, Juvenile Justice in Independent Ghana." Good summarization of the JJA and the additional implementation of the CP. Expand more on the juvenile system process under the JJA. Have a more detailed criticism on why the systems in the Ghanian Juvenile justice system failed and how it fits with how the JJA failed.

Kevin: - "This detention scheme struggled with increasing numbers of juvenile delinquents." Would be more concrete if could add numbers to corroborate. - Section "Juvenile Delinquency in Colonial Ghana" - would be great if there were a clearer logic flow. For example, starting from the argument for a juvenile justice system -> the status quo of juvenile delinquency -> how the new system attempted to improve the status quo - Section "Processes of the JJA" - you described really clearly, but could be a good place to insert a graph (flow chart) to further explain the processes. Overall it was very comprehensive! One piece of advice would be to have a clearer logic flow overall. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kevinzhang0430 (talk • contribs) 21:33, 6 November 2020 (UTC)