User talk:Tevans31

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Parkinson's disease
I have reverted your recent addition to the article, which had multiple issues including adding redundant material that is found elsewhere in the article, using sources that do not meet our guideline on reliable sourcing for medical claims. I would suggest starting a discussion on the talk page of the article here to discuss specific additions and suggestions for improving the article. Thanks. Yobol (talk) 21:42, 27 July 2012 (UTC)

Welcome
I see you've put a lot of work into a new article about Parkinson's disease and diet. Thanks for your hard work. There are a few things around here though that might make the article problematic for Wikipedia to host. If something is "just beginning to be researched more fully" then it may not be notable enough for an article. Plus, we already have a Management of Parkinson's disease article with a diet section. So that's probably where the appropriate content should have gone, instead of starting a new article. Also, medically-related articles typically follow WP:MEDRS for sourcing. Just skim it to get the main idea. If you have any questions, you can ask me at my talk page. Again, thanks for your contribution, and if you need any help learning something so that you can enjoy yourself and create content that will definitely last around here, let me know. Biosthmors (talk) 22:47, 27 July 2012 (UTC)

Yes I would second these twos advice
The key to Wikipedia is that we are a review of secondary sources rather than primary ones. If you notice our high quality article are nearly completely referenced to recent review articles or major textbooks. If you have question feel free to drop me a note, send me an email or write a comment at WT:MED. Once again welcome. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your talk page please reply on mine) 03:10, 28 July 2012 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Parkinson's disease (2) concern
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Your article submission Parkinson's disease (2)


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. &mdash;Anne Delong (talk) 13:43, 2 December 2013 (UTC)