User talk:Tevin Mitchell/sandbox

Peer Response - Jillin Colunga It seems that this article will be improved by what you plan to do. One thing to do to make this article stronger might be to include headings on some of the women that hold influence on Black women. Also make a heading for Black lives matter and for modern time women who hold a powerful role. Also under upcoming events you might want to change it to just events and talk about some of the events they have done in the past and how they are important, and what they accomplish. Adding more information on the history might also be helpful. Creating a separate heading to explain the events that occurred during the Ferguson, Missouri police shooting will also be helpful that way the readers know how and why the group formed.

Peer Response: Chantal Robles This is a great article to further expand on and elaborate. Given that this group is a black feminist organization responding to police brutality, it would greatly benefit from a heading on "Say Her Name" that would highlight the importance of police brutality against black women that so often goes unnoticed. More background information would also benefit this article, since it states that the formation of this group (Black Feminist Future) is a direct response to the police shootings in Ferguson but offers no description of the event. Statistics showing the number of black women that are targeted by police violence (sexual, emotional, or physical) would greatly improve the content of this article. Maybe Assata Shakur's reading on women in prison would be helpful, or Danielle McGuire's book "At the Dark End of the Street" has a lot of information regarding black women's continued historical fight against sexualized violence, including sexualized violence at the hands of police officers.

Tevin, if you'd like your peers to see this, you should post it to their sandboxes or talk pages. Prof.Vi (talk) 21:59, 1 May 2018 (UTC)