User talk:TexasDoc320/sandbox

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Nice work on your draft. I could give better feedback if I knew precisely where you wanted to add this information to the self-induced abortion article. Some thoughts moving forward One broader concern I have is that your additions are very US-centric, in an article that already has a strong US-lean. That isn't a reason not to add this information (more good information is always good) but you should consider whether it's possible for you to add even a little non-US context here. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:37, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
 * You should turn your external links into references. You can use URLs to generate references like I did here. If you just use a link, your sources can suffer link rot; when you use a formatted reference like this, the full source citation is preserved, including the date accessed, which will often make it possible to find sources using the Wayback Machine.
 * In the United States, experts report... It's usually better to be more specific and avoid "experts report" kind of writing. I'm also not sure that Vox is the best possible source for this. A more authoritative source would be better.
 * It is not common for women in the United States to be charged for the crime of self-inducing an abortion and they are rarely convicted - again, this is an area where it helps to be specific.