User talk:Thaonguyen050300/Corporate design

I posted a peer review of your article

LycheeJelly1 (talk) 07:03, 1 February 2021 (UTC)

Feedback
Greetings, and {{U|Kiyana929} have left you some really helpful feedback on your work so far. I strongly advise you to carefully read their reviews to help you work to continue to improve your article. When you started working on this article it was classified as a stub and after your additions it seems to have as much information as a start-class article, but it is not yet well-sourced.

recommends that you add a lead section to the article and I strongly agree that this is a really important step for bringing your article to the next level. He also suggested that you might remove the DNA metaphor and I agree with this also.

As pointed out, it seems like there are only 2 sources in the article. I strongly agree that this is an issue that you should address. You've added quite a lot of information, and it looks like you have plans to add even more. However, I think that what's urgent right now is to add citations to the wp:reliable sources you've been using to draft your new content.

Please reach out to me once you've done this and I'll give you more feedback.

It's been great to see the progress you've been making at adding content to this article. I'm really looking forward to seeing it when you're done working on it! Groceryheist (talk) 00:49, 5 February 2021 (UTC)