User talk:ThatIndividual99/Transgender Persons (Protection of Rights) Act, 2018

Peer review: Transgender Persons (Protection of Rights) Act, 2018

Overall Evaluation: This is a very good paragraph. It is a subtopic, that very much relates to the overall topic. The paragraph stays on task and is backed up by reliable sources. The paragraph is already quite strong, I don't think much needs to be changed to make it better. However, be careful and remain neutral in your paragraph it might be a little bias at some points (or I could be totally wrong and it's not.) Also, I think we are really supposed to have citations after every 2 sentences in our paragraph. It appears you don't have that, so you might just want to add some citations in your writing. Other than that, great job!!! Camrynli19 (talk) 21:53, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Overall, I think the quality and the language of the content you are adding is great! I think you do a great job at detailing the faults relating to the effectiveness of the law. I would be careful to make sure you are citing your sources more frequently to avoid any discrepancies in terms of where your information is coming from. From quickly glancing at the link to your third source, I believe there is more you can add to make your citation more complete (name of the author for example). Besides that, I think your addition is great and I feel like I learned a lot from the little I read!Jillianb06 (talk) 01:36, 3 December 2020 (UTC)