User talk:Thatswrite

Sweet Caroline
Hello Thatswrite, I noticed your contribution to the above article, here, and I would like to let you know why it is being removed. First, and foremost, it violates several key policies here, one of them, a core policy, is the neutral point of view, your edit was not neutral, as it has an opinionated tone to it, not supported by reliable, third-party sources. Blogs are not reliable sources, and saying that you saw something on TV is also not a reliable source. A song can be inspired by something, but that does not necessarily mean that every lyric of a song means something about the inspiration. Another very important policy that needs to be watched with that edit, is the biographies of living persons policy, as that passage makes some leaps of assumption, (from non-reliable sources, blogs) that are bordering on defamatory, and that cannot be allowed, for legal reasons. I hope that you understand, but unless you can get a reference from Oberman's site, and write something neutrally, giving attribution to the source in citation, then I'm afraid that passage is really not appropriate for the article, as it already is mentioned that Kennedy was the inspiration of the song. I hope you understand, and please do take a look at those policies mentioned here, as they are quite important. Cheers, Ariel  ♥  Gold  07:31, 21 November 2007 (UTC)