User talk:TheBansheeAct

Venom (comics)
Hi. Welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for working to improve the site with your edit to Venom (comics), as we really appreciate your participation. However, the edit had to be reverted, because Wikipedia cannot accept unsourced material or original research. This includes material lacking cited sources, or obtained through personal knowledge or unpublished synthesis of previously published material. Wikipedia requires that all material added to articles be accompanied by reliable, verifiable sources explicitly cited in the text in the form of an inline citation, which you can learn to make here.

In addition, if you're going to add material to or rewrite the opening sentence of the Lead section (which is also the opening sentence of the article), please do so in a coherent manner. The prior version of that sentence: "Venom, or the Venom Symbiote, is a fictional extraterrestrial life form appearing in books published by Marvel Comics, specifically those featuring Spider-Man.", is a clearly-written sentence with an explanatory function for the reader. Your version: "Venom, or the Venom Symbiote, becomes antivenom in acrisis where he must protect earth from the mighty Boo. is a fictional extraterrestrial life form appearing in books published by Marvel Comics, specifically those featuring Spider-Man.", is not. You not only added needless detail to the opening sentence, failed to properly space the words "a" and "crisis", and put a lowercase "e" on the word "Earth", but you didn't even edit the following sentence as its own separate sentence.

If you have any other questions about editing, or need help regarding the site's policies, just let me know by leaving a message for me in a new section at the bottom of my talk page. Thanks. :-) Nightscream (talk) 14:33, 21 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Hi. Thanks for adding that material on "Spider-Island" to Venom. However, you also added material on upcoming Venom stories, citing a Marvel.com page that makes no mention of those stories, so I had to remove it.


 * Also, while a certain amount of latitude is afforded to editors regarding their talk pages, changing other editors' talk page messages, as you did here. It's considered a breach of talk page etiquette, and to alter my message so that it reads what you rewrote to say, which gives the appearance that it was me who wrote that message, is extremely incivil. Please try to respect the other editors in the Wikipedia community. Thanks. Nightscream (talk) 03:20, 22 November 2011 (UTC)