User talk:TheFoolishThought/New sandbox

TheFoolishThought,

Overall you have a solid article, really the only thing I would like more of would be more information on the Ecology of the fouling community.

--EKays3838EKays3838 (talk) 19:06, 29 October 2018 (UTC)

Marc's peer review
Hi TheFoolishThought, The article is well balanced, your lead being a good hook. But for about where they might be found, like what country's or so on. Like you down about they are found on side of ships but where are they usually located. Also add more to the section about Ecology, it has not information there but adding more should balance out your article more. Marcbluedragon (talk) 19:04, 29 October 2018 (UTC)

Draft feedback
Hi, Keenan!

I see you're focused on environmental impacts so far, which is a great place to expand (and could still use further expansion). My biggest note as you continue to expand and revise this article is that I wonder what sources you're finding and what information they are providing you--the slim changes/additions so far leave me a little concerned that you may not be finding much source material. Availability of information aside, questions I might be looking for information around if I were the one working on this article might include: --how do they help test effectiveness of artificial reefs? Tell readers more about this... --are there examples of fouling communities harboring invasive species? Are there particular species they are most likely to bring from place to place? What are the impacts of these species introductions to new areas? --what other ways to they positively (or negatively!) affect the environment? --who coined this term? --how have fouling communities been used in research?

I look forward to seeing what else you add to this! Please let me know if you have questions or concerns about finding/using sources! Nicoleccc (talk) 23:18, 29 October 2018 (UTC)