User talk:TheRidler27/Ishac Bertran

Fantastic job on this! I think this article gives me a nice sense of who this person is and why he is important. A lot of Bertran's work sounds cool and innovative. He definitely sounds like a notable person! I would consider adding more information of his work if it is available! What he does sounds really interesting/ground-breaking and would love to learn more. But, at the same time, I totally get it if there is nothing else to add/can't find other sources! Also, I mentioned this in a comment on the article's page itself as well--I think you would need to cite most (if not all) your sentences because it is outside information. However, maybe I am missing something! I think the most important thing would be to add the citations. Again, I could really be misinterpreting this, so forgive me if I am! Your article will likely be better from an outside perspective if you have more sources backing up what you are saying (and a higher chance that this person will actually become notable in Wikipedia). If possible, try to find third-party/outside sources rather than from him. But, again, I get that that can be difficult, so just a reminder. You made me interested in what this person does and proving to me the importance of his work! I feel like that is a hard goal to achieve and I need to try to apply that to my own Wikipedia article! Great job! Lilaclydia (talk) 01:33, 24 November 2021 (UTC)