User talk:TheTank95

Welcome!
Hello, TheTank95, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:34, 13 February 2018 (UTC)

Feedback for annotated bibliography
It looks like you've skipped the annotations of each article (summarizing the articles, their strengths and weaknesses and how they support or refute your controversy) and jumped straight to doing your paragraphs. The annotated bibliography is important since it helps you consider the strength of your evidence and its relevance to the topic; it also helps you when citing. Right now, you have no indication what information came from which article and also mention articles that aren't listed in your reference list. As for the articles there, the review articles in particular are good and you'll want to rely on these more than news or other less reliable sources (see the library module again for information on the levels of evidence you'll need). Let us know if you need help or have questions! Camand74 (talk) 16:35, 12 April 2018 (UTC)