User talk:The Boss With The Floss/sandbox1

Reference Note
This is coming together! As a remind you won't want to use other Wikipedia articles as references - see reference #3. Feel free to use references in that article as references in what you've been working on. Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:53, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

A few other notes
Ian also had some excellent feedback to share. I realize there a couple points, but they're all minor tweaks which is great! Excellent work.
 * I would recommend starting with "Dentists who treat patients with special needs..." to define exactly what they do.
 * I would remove the word "understanding" and "desire" from the first paragraph. It's more Wikipedia-like to say that "not all dental schools offer..."
 * In the second paragraph I would consider changing "There are various reasons why a dentist does not complete formal post-doctoral residency training, namely, it is not a requirement to practice general dentistry in the United States," to something more succinct like "Dentists in the United States are not obliged to complete formal post-doctoral residency training because it is not required."
 * It also may be worth stating which body isn't requiring the residency training - whether it's universities, the ADA, or another organization.
 * Remove "as mentioned earlier" from the last sentence. It sounds very natural, but has more of a conversational tone to it

Let me know if you have any questions about these points. Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:18, 14 July 2020 (UTC)