User talk:The Gentle Hamster/sandbox

Peer review from Biology Gal
I feel like the rewording alone really helped to improve the flow of the article. I also really liked how you clarified what was trying to be said by adding more detail. Overall, I think your updated version of the article makes a lot more sense than the previous one. However, I noticed you used a lot of direct quotes. Those can definitely be a great tool, but if possible, I would recommend trying to put some of the information in your own words (while still citing the source). I also noticed two of your sources are from 2015. While these aren’t necessarily extremely out of date, newer sources might better support the information within the article. Overall, I think your updated version is great and adds a lot to the quality of the article. Biology Gal (talk) 01:31, 7 November 2022 (UTC)