User talk:The Sharpest Lives/Archives/2024/June

Proposed deletion of Punk Bunny Coffee


The article Punk Bunny Coffee has been proposed for deletion&#32;because of the following concern: "Article reads like an advertisement, and I can barely find any sources following the name change."

While all constructive contributions to Wikipedia are appreciated, pages may be deleted for any of several reasons.

You may prevent the proposed deletion by removing the notice, but please explain why in your edit summary or on the article's talk page.

Please consider improving the page to address the issues raised. Removing will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. The Sharpest Lives (the deadliest to lead) 14:25, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

New page reviewer granted
Hi The Sharpest Lives, I just wanted to let you know that I have added the new page reviewer user right to your account. This means you now have access to the page curation tools and can start patrolling pages from the new pages feed. If you asked for this at requests for permissions, please check back there to see if your access is time-limited or if there are other comments.

This is a good time to re-acquaint yourself with the guidance at New pages patrol. Before you get started, please take the time to:


 * Add Wikipedia talk:New pages patrol/Reviewers to your watchlist to follow NPP-related discussions
 * If you use Twinkle, configure it to log your CSDs and PRODs
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You can find a list of other useful links and tools for patrollers at New pages patrol/Resources. If you are ever unsure what to do, ask your fellow patrollers or just leave the page for someone else to review – you're not alone! signed,Rosguill talk 14:45, 5 June 2024 (UTC)

Good article mentorship
I had a look at the article myself plus its review page, and I think it could use a bit more comments. Other than that, I think you have a good grasp of the other criterion so far. Good work on pointing out possible copyvio, taking the time to assess the use of visual and aural media, and asking about the use of primary sources. PSA 🏕️🪐 (please make some noise...) 03:37, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
 * The NFUR for the sample can be improved, and you might want to be a bit more stringent in that regard when reviewing. IMO "most ambitious" is not a helpful description that can be intuited using a sample, and more concrete commentary on the composition should be the focus instead if samples are to be used on music articles.
 * In reviews, you should also make sure to look at:
 * the article's concision, part of criterion 1a (e.g. the two uses of "It was announced" and the statement "It peaked at No. 1 on the Australian Music Radio Airplay Project (AMRAP) Metro Charts, remaining in that position for two weeks" can be trimmed)
 * the lead (where is the description of the album's lyrics and music?)
 * and use of quotations (many of the lineson the critical reception section can be paraphrased).
 * For more general advice, if you are reviewing a song or album article, it helps to look at similar articles that are already GAs to see what such an article should or should not have.

Early congrats!
(Well it's not yet the 8th but might not be online tomorrow so pretend it is the 8th or read it again on the 8th.)

Happy Account Creation Day! On 8 June 2023 you created this account. A major step into your Wikipedian journey. It has been a year and I'd like to say....

Thanks for your stellar contributions and I hope to see you around Soapforduck ( Say what? )(Did what?) 08:08, 7 June 2024 (UTC)


 * I didn't even realize! Wow... one year already. Good job catching that and thanks so much!!! The Sharpest Lives (the deadliest to lead) 16:22, 7 June 2024 (UTC)

Invitation to participate in WP:GARC
Hello, I noticed you have an article listed at WP:GAN. I recently started a project, Good Article Review Circles, and thought you might be interested. This initiative helps articles get reviewed more quickly through collaborative efforts. By joining, you'll review others' articles and get your own reviewed in return. Check out the page for more details! — GMH Melbourne (talk) 14:53, 7 June 2024 (UTC)

WP:GARC: Invitation to review In the Darkest of Nights, Let the Birds Sing
Hello The Sharpest Lives, You have been paired at good article review circles to review In the Darkest of Nights, Let the Birds Sing. At the same time,, will be reviewing the article you nominated. Please wait 24 hours or until all users have accepted their nomination before starting your review in case a user in your circle decides to decline their invite.

To accept or decline this invitation to review the article, visit WT:GARC/Circles.

GMH Melbourne (talk) 08:59, 8 June 2024 (UTC)

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Your GA nomination of Growing Up (The Linda Lindas album)
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Growing Up (The Linda Lindas album) you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by ChristieBot, on behalf of Joeyquism -- Joeyquism (talk) 06:02, 9 June 2024 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Growing Up (The Linda Lindas album)
The article Growing Up (The Linda Lindas album) you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold. The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Growing Up (The Linda Lindas album) and Talk:Growing Up (The Linda Lindas album)/GA1 for issues which need to be addressed. Message delivered by ChristieBot, on behalf of Joeyquism -- Joeyquism (talk) 20:42, 10 June 2024 (UTC)