User talk:Thealexjr100/Meridian (novel)

peer review
From what i've read this looks good. The writing is clear and easy to read. Angela Apple (talk) 23:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

I read through your article draft and while I had some suggestions for you to further strengthen your draft, overall I believe your draft to be very strong. I believe that your draft will make your assigned article more complete. MThomas45512 (talk) 03:23, 14 October 2022 (UTC)MThomas45512

So far, the content you posted is good. The information is written in an organized way and is clear to read. Jessmanners (talk) 23:22, 20 October 2022 (UTC)

From what I have read on the article draft and sandboxes, it seems like you are adding very informal information to the article. You add good themes to your assigned article. YossTur (talk) 00:43, 21 October 2022 (UTC)

Meridian group: Some paragraphs here, particularly those giving historical context, are strong. The lead should introduce us more to the text and can be worked on more. It is a general introduction. Themes of motherhood can be moved and expanded on under a sub-header for that theme.--Crisedevers (talk) 16:56, 28 October 2022 (UTC)