User talk:Theamericani

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Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/William Scharf
As Chzz said on the page, the main issue is that much of this seems to be opinion, rather then cold hard fact. Here's Chzz's comment: "E.g. 'It is to be noted that Rothko was the best man' - who says it is to be noted? 'his own style, which is both expressive and evocative' - according to who? 'compositions seem spontaneous and mysterious, conveying emotion' - this looks like opinion, rather than fact." Please clean your submission up and resubmit when you're done.  Nolelover   Talk · Contribs  16:09, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

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Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/William Scharf concern
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Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/William Scharf concern
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Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/William Scharf concern
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Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/William Scharf concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/William Scharf, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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