User talk:Thebodocious/T’s Trans Subjectivity and Communication, Rhetoric and Queer Public Memory, and Communication and Homonationalism/Bibliography

J's Peer Review to T
Hi! I hope you had a great weekend! I really like how thorough your bibliography is, but I'm not sure it is in the format that the rubric told us to do for class and I think it's rather in the format Wikipedia provided. Either way, it's great work. You have 6 really great sources but I think one of your sources is missing the cite button, so it doesn't show up in your references and makes it look like you only have 5. For your citations, I don't think you have to list the citation above your explanation of why you're going to link it since you are using the citation tool, but that really is just the technicalities of the assignment, so it might not matter as much. For the DOIs citations, I think you used the TXST link instead of the DOI, so I would just switch that out otherwise a person who is trying to look at your sources will have to login to TXST. I'm just saying this because all of your DOIs say "libproxy.txstate.edu" in them. All of your sources are Comm or Rhetoric sources. One of your sources is less that 10 pages so I would still use that source but add another source that has more than 10 pages. I think it's the Trans (gender) trouble source, it says you only used pages 190 - 195. All of the other sources are more than 10 pages. You have good explanations for all of your sources, so I don't really have critiques on how you wrote anything or the content of your sources. It's going to be interesting to see how you connect such wide ranging topics together because some of your articles differ a lot. You're a great writer however so I'm sure you have it handled. Moonmocha (talk) 22:55, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

Dr. E's Review
T, good start here. Great job using COMM sources (YAY). You don’t quite have enough sources yet. Also, since we decided to cut homonationalism and instead have you focus on queer public memory and queer counterpublics, you will need 2-3 sources for each of those sources since sources 4 and 5 are cut. Please see Canvas and respond to this feedback on Wiki during our workshop time. OsaRosa (talk) 06:51, 16 April 2024 (UTC)