User talk:Thecobbrooklyn

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Pol430 talk to me 22:36, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Edward Margolies
Hi Cob! I did some work on the Edward Margolies article for creation. I did quite a number on the article, so bear with me while I break down what I did and why I did it. It is pretty tricky learning to write Wikipedia when you are used to writing in a more literary/critical setting, but, it's a valuable skill and I hope you learn from my edits. And remember, everyone has their way of writing Wikipedia. I've found more value working collaboratively like this, than I ever found from just having someone tell me what I did wrong and leaving me be to feel like crap about my contributions.


 * 1) I combined the personal life/education/teaching career sections. This not only reads a bit smoother in a nice set of paragraphs, but, is also a bit shorter. You will see that I added  tags throughout this section. There are no inline citations (unlike the literary work section), therefore we consider this information original research and we can't keep original research on Wikipedia. It'll be removed if it isn't cited with a reliable secondary source! So please add citations in if you can.
 * 2) You'll see a tag for regarding Margolies teaching at the Sorbonne. There were numerous schools at the Sorbonne, and at this point, it could be construed as him just standing out front of the fountain at the Sorbonne shouting out literary information and "teaching" imaginary students. Okay, that's dramatic, but, without clarification we have no clue where he taught and if it was legit.
 * 3) I added wikilinks throughout the article. That is a must have for any Wikipedia article =) Only for words that we generally consider "not obvious" in their meaning (so you don't have to link to the word "book" for example, most English reading people know what a book is.). You'll also see some red links, we need articles about the red links and sometimes people get motivated to write them by seeing them.
 * 4) I removed the praise from Kirkus about Native Sons, it was a bit too dramatic for the article and came off as if you are selling the book to the reader. I did add a quote from the Kirkus review that describes the content, though. We want the reader to make their own decision about the book.
 * 5) I also condensed the section about The Art of Richard Wright and cleaned it up a bit.
 * 6) I removed the paragraph that featured his other works and created a bibliography instead. This is cleaner, easier to navigate, and is a standard for most articles where people have written things. If you find that there are further readings that other writers have done about Margolies, then we can create a section called "Further reading." If there are external links, we can create a section for that too.

If you can work on those citation needed sections, then you can resubmit the article for review. I'll add the article to my watch list! Great work so far, and don't let the Wikiworld getcha down :) Sarah (talk) 18:19, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

FYI
Hey! I asked a question at the Teahouse about our situation Teahouse/Questions. God, I can't wait to get this article in the main space! :) I'm sure you can't wait... Sarah (talk) 15:22, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Nathan2055talk 20:20, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

"notability"
Cob, the subject is notable. I have a feeling the article reviewer, might not be familiar with African American literature (not many people are on Wikipedia, actually). So don't let that get you down, we'll figure this out. The subject is notable. Sarah (talk) 21:00, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Edward Margolies, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you are more than welcome to continue submitting work to Articles for Creation. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  Nolelover   Talk · Contribs  23:03, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
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Nathan2055talk 00:38, 30 March 2012 (UTC)

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