User talk:Theflyingmelon

Not quite ready
In my opinion, the article (here) is not quite ready to move into article space. I'll explain why, and remove the request to move this article into article space. Other editors may feel differently, so if you disagree with my reasons, feel free to replace the move request template, and someone else may move it for you.

I liked it a lot, and think it just needs some relatively minor tweaks. Referencing is important, but the way to do it is not obvious, and you don't quite have the hang of it. Try checking out WP:CITE and footnotes to see if that helps. If you are still confused, don't feel bad, as it becomes easy, but not when starting out. If you are still interested in working on this article, but not seeing how to do the references, let me know and I'll get you started.

You can contact me by posting at my talk page. (Click on "new section", add a subject and just let me know you want help.)-- SPhilbrick  T  17:29, 15 May 2010 (UTC)