User talk:TheguywiththePorsche911/T’s History of LGBTQ+ Communication Studies and History of Queer Communication Studies

some feedback
Hi @TheguywiththePorsche911, Based on your draft, I see an essay like discussion of the ideas of identity politics and queer theory. But I do not see much about the history of queer communication studies like when did it first begin to develop? Who were the academics or researchers that started to develop this field of study? Are there any significant institutions that were involved in its development? I think your sources are good, but do they provide any info on the history of this field of study?

And remember you're writing about LGBTQ+ Communication studies, the field of study. That's the star of this article, so providing a history of LGBTQ+ communications studies is really important for the article. Looping in @OsaRosa. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 00:29, 16 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hello B, I have looked through all of your feedback and with the help of Dr. E, I was able to find some sources that are communication related. I was using a communication journal that we read earlier this semester in order to find my original 6 sources. I assumed that they were all communications sources but later found out that wasn't the case. I will also be meeting with her tomorrow via zoom so any other questions I have I will just clear up with her. I appreciate your help. TheguywiththePorsche911 (talk) TheguywiththePorsche911 (talk) 01:56, 17 April 2024 (UTC) 01:54, 17 April 2024 (UTC)

B's Peer Review for Class
While reading T’s article bodies on his sandbox, I found myself quite fascinated with what T had to say in their Wiki article. After reading both paragraphs, I can say I didn’t see anything that felt biased towards one opinion over the other. Both paragraphs are neutral sounding and are neither overrepresented nor underrepresented.

The citations all seem to be in working order. While there was one article that didn’t have a link highlighted, the others have working links. However, there were three links that lead me to a page where I had to either pay for the article or have access granted to view it properly. Thus, I was not able to tell if the facts stated in T’s paragraphs were reliable or not.

After reading T’s article bodies, I can see they lead with a good sentence that follows well into the topic they talked about. I can understand how T’s article bodies are going to fit into our overall section of the wiki assignment. I also didn’t see any words that would be considered “watch words” and T’s writing style is also stated with facts and important knowledge that a reader might need while viewing. T’s style of writing is written in a very professional Wiki style writing including avoiding jargon, avoiding questions and opinions. T also did well to properly cite every two or more sentences with the sources he had found. He also did well to stick to writing in the 3rd person. It almost felt like a professor wrote these two paragraphs which is great. (BeckAugust (talk) 01:13, 16 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hey B, I appreciate the feedback. Unfortunately, the majority of my sources aren't usable since they are not communication related so I am going to look for some new sources. Dr. E gave me some feedback on how to find some better sources so I am going to spend some time on communication source. I originally pulled these sources from Yep's journal we read in week 1 assuming they were all communication related and that was the simple mistake that messed up my entire page up to this point. I will be sure to take your feedback into account as I make revisions. TheguywiththePorsche911 (talk) 02:00, 17 April 2024 (UTC)

Dr. E's Review
T, good start here as B notes. See Brianda’s very helpful feedback. The biggest challenge is only source 6 is COMM, so the other content is great but won’t work for the history of LGBTQ+ COMM Studies. Let’s get you some clearer COMM sources in today’s workshop. OsaRosa (talk) 07:22, 16 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi Dr. E, I now understand where I went wrong when searching for my 6 sources. I will be sure to take your feedback you gave me during class in order to find some more suitable sources. I will try to find a list of sources prior to our zoom meeting. Fixing this will make the rest of the assignments that much easier. I Appreciate the feedback you also gave me on canvas. TheguywiththePorsche911 (talk) 02:03, 17 April 2024 (UTC)