User talk:Thelmi

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September 2016
Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia, as you did to Virtual reality. While objective prose about beliefs, organisations, people, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not intended to be a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Thank you. freshacconci talk to me  04:21, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

Why you say it is promotional? I added a use which is missing and provide some referenced examples (I do not work for or being paid by any of the sources I used) ... Can you pls clarify? Thelmi (talk) 16:18, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * It's pretty straightforward (and if you read the links above it would be clarified): you added text that was promotional.

"With BestBuy starting to roll our VR and estimated more than by major brands, we should anticipate major shopping patterns and breakthrough in over VR outdating and disrupting the traditional web-based ecommerce sites."

Why is it written as "our" and "we" if you don't work for the sources? Whether or not you work there is irrelevant, however. Non-objective prose that is clearly using promotional language is against guidelines. Please read the links above. freshacconci talk to me  17:38, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

It is a type roll out not roll our and we refers to we as readers. It this answers your concerns please add my update back and I will fix the typo.

Thanks! Thelmi (talk) 21:17, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

October 2016
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Please do not add commentary or your own personal analysis to Wikipedia articles, as you did to Webster Hall. Doing so violates Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy and breaches the formal tone expected in an encyclopedia. Thank you. Linguist 111 If you reply here, please add    to the start of your message 11:00, 8 October 2016 (UTC)