User talk:Theo91297/sandbox

Time to get moving
Theo - - now's the time to post your article selection analysis (plus 3 -5 sources) and assign yourself an article in our dashboard.

Nov 11
The article is moving along. What is your model article? We need to get things in shape so that we can start peer-reviewing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Profhanley (talk • contribs) 19:51, 12 November 2018 (UTC)

feedback
The meat and bones of this article are definitely there - - now, it's time to shape things up. I.e. clean up the prose, organize the sections, write a lead, and integrate sources (esp. in the last section). Profhanley (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 18:23, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Cazzlong(Dominic) Review
The story is present extremely well when describing the plot. Also you have used great sources and cited them perfectly below. However I would feel that more background in the beginning so we have a better understanding of who the author is, what time this was written and so on. I.e. I did not know Belize was under British rule before reading the plot. A small piece of background information before going into the actual text severely help the readers understand the story. Yet I have learned something as well. Your citations are perfect and they are cited clearly, this is something that I will take away for my own article as my citations are incomplete. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cazzlong (talk • contribs) 19:53, 6 December 2018 (UTC)

Valerie Vera’s Response
Hey Theo, so you’re book seems interesting. Try to be more elaborate with your plot summery because it’s a little confusing to read. The style section is good, I like the quote you used in there. But just read through it and clean up little mistakes. Overall, straightforward and.a decent article. Good luck! Val from socal (talk) 19:27, 11 December 2018 (UTC)