User talk:Theodore8/sandbox

Kelvin's Peer Review
I think that this article does a great job of showing the implications, uses, and history of art in South Africa, which is something that the original article lacks. This is useful because it contextualizes the art rather than just formally describing the way it works, and shows how present-day artists are stuck in this lens of apartheid art.

I think that it would be useful to include some more detailed information on how the shift from art being for the upper classes to for all. Where did the new social consciousness emerge? Who did it emerge amongst and how did it stick? I think these would be beneficial for giving a more detailed historical contextualization of the rest of the information you provide.

I think the article you’re working on so far is very solid, but it could do with some more contextualization (as mentioned above) and possibly another round of edits (e.g. “Black South Africans” in the first sentence, “inequality gap is larger than that of other countries in the world”, etc.). However, the article’s structure is great! I would love to know more information about what each of the specific elements you’re referring to. It could be a good idea to hyperlink topics such as Venda sculpting. Great work so far!