User talk:Thepinkservbot/sandbox

Hi Michael,

I think you have a good start here, and it's really just a matter of fleshing out all this material and adding content. Your sources look good and should be incorporated more specifically. Let me know if you particular questions as you go!

Adovevie (talk) 15:55, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Hi Michael, I think this sounds like a good start so far! Your lead-in is clear and provides a good overview of the term. Structurally, this seems like an effective way to set up your article. All of your sources look relevant, and I like the variety of contexts your sources cover. As you add to your article, maybe you can expand on not only the manifestations of femmephobia in society, but the consequences of femmephobia, too. Overall, this sounds like an interesting topic and article.Madimargolis (talk) 09:20, 15 March 2017 (UTC)