User talk:Therearenogods/sandbox/draft

I thought this as very well written and there is a lot of information in this draft. One correction I have is maybe add some more articles/ citations throughout the draft, to make your standpoint a little clearer.

Paul Shin
I think all the sources are reliable and credible. One suggestion is that explain more detail about who is "some people". Eui135 (talk) 12:50, 1 November 2018 (UTC)