User talk:TheresaObi

Streetwear
Hi. I'm afraid that Wikipedia is not the place for you to write or publish your classwork essay. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia. That means it does not contain original research, thoughts or opinions. Everything should be cited to sources. The original research happens in the sources, not Wikipedia.

I've cleaned up some of what you've done. Please feel free to improve the article, but please take into account the following points;


 * There is already a section on Sneaker culture here in the Sneaker article. What makes your section different and part of the Streetwear article?  For it to be part of this article you need to demonstrate that it is part of Streetwear.  You don't have a cite that does that.
 * Please do not embed links to other websites in the text of the article. If you want the external websites to verify what you are saying, then cite them.
 * Encyclopedia's term things neutrally. This means you don't write things like "The rise of social media brought this niche market to its glory now" or "exciting collaboration".  These are voicing opinions, which Wikipedia doesn't have.
 * If you are going to say things like "The popularity of sneakers continues to rise, as well as its community’s engagement with buying, selling and trading shoes." Then you need to support that claim with a cite.  Otherwise it sounds like your own opinion.  What factually demonstrates the continuing rise of sneakers popularity?  State that, with a cite.
 * Wikipedia does not directly address the reader as "you".
 * "In the coming years" means in the future, not the past.

Thanks. -- Escape Orbit (Talk) 16:57, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

April 2020
Hello, I'm Killarnee. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions to Streetwear have been undone because they did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Teahouse. Thanks. --Killarnee ( T•1•2 ) 01:22, 8 April 2020 (UTC)