User talk:Theretiredgymnast/sandbox

Article Evaluation
Noticed that this article has good categorisation. Grooming section could be expanded to include a more comprehensive view of things that could be done. All the citation links in health work. Moreover this article represents a neutral point of view while leaning slightly towards the positive. This article is rated good, and the talk page does not reflect any concerns.

GovTrack Peer Review
Your outline has good ideas I think you are heading in the right direction. There is certainly a need for more content and citations on this subject which you recognize. I think starting more in-depth topics on the history of the company and the use of GovTrack through the years. It would be helpful to list or cite the sources you intend to use ahead of time. I noticed you referenced a New Yorker article in your plan but did not link it. Remember to add in citations to everything as well once you actually write the article. About reaching out to the company itself be wary of including that information without sufficient external sources. Other than that I think you are off to a great start. Aurabarrera (talk) 17:06, 24 March 2018 (UTC)