User talk:Theribbitgroup

Your submission at Articles for creation
 You recently made a submission to Articles for Creation. Your article has been reviewed and because some issues were found it could not be accepted in its current form; it is now located at Wikipedia&. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. Feel free to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! ɠǀɳ̩ςεΝɡ bomb  02:55, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 You recently made a submission to Articles for Creation. Your article has been reviewed and because some issues were found, it could not be accepted in its current form; it is now located at Wikipedia&. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. Feel free to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! ɠǀɳ̩ςεΝɡ bomb  04:10, 7 June 2011 (UTC) I want to follow up with you on this. Thank you very much for adding the new sourcing to the article. I think you've demonstrated that this brand has been the subject of significant coverage in reliable, independent sources such that it passes the all-important notability guideline for inclusion in Wikipedia. That's the good news. On the less good news side (but certainly not bad news), the article still reads a bit like a "puff" piece. To give you an idea of what would be a more encyclopedic approach, I rewrote the "History" section in the article to make it more neutral and -- importantly -- to make sure that everything in that section is verifiable per the references you've supplied. You can see the previous version of the "History" section here and can compare that version with the current one to see what I've changed. My suggestion to you is to go through the remaining sections and do two things: Please feel absolutely free to let me know if you have any questions or if I can help further. I definitely think this should be an article on Wikipedia, so the question now is cleaning it up and making it encyclopedic. Best, ɠǀɳ̩ςεΝɡ  bomb  04:15, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Remove or rephrase anything that seems non-neutral in tone. Phrases like "caught the attention of anyone within ear shot and created a strong buzz" in the "Marketing" section are non-encyclopedic and should be revised.
 * 2) Make absolutely sure that every claim you make is supported by the references you are using. I noticed several instances in the History section where the sources were not discussing claims that had been added.

Your submission at Articles for creation
 You recently made a submission to Articles for Creation. Your article has been reviewed and because some issues were found, it could not be accepted in its current form; it is now located at Wikipedia&. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. Feel free to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Tashif (talk) 09:26, 13 June 2011 (UTC)

A belated welcome!
Here's wishing you a belated welcome to Wikipedia, Theribbitgroup. I see that you've already been around awhile and wanted to thank you for your contributions. Though you seem to have been successful in finding your way around, you may benefit from following some of the links below, which help editors get the most out of Wikipedia: Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name on talk pages using four tildes ( ~ ); that should automatically produce your username and the date after your post.
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Again, welcome! Tashif (talk) 09:26, 13 June 2011 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Your submission at Articles for creation
 You recently made a submission to Articles for Creation. Your article has been reviewed and because some issues were found, it could not be accepted in its current form; it is now located at Wikipedia&. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. Feel free to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! avs5221(talk&#124;contrib) 10:30, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 You recently made a submission to Articles for Creation. Your article has been reviewed and because some issues were found, it could not be accepted in its current form; it is now located at Wikipedia&. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. Feel free to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Topher385 (talk) 20:26, 1 August 2011 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 You recently made a submission to Articles for Creation. Your article has been reviewed and because some issues were found, it could not be accepted in its current form; it is now located at Wikipedia&. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. Feel free to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! CharlieEchoTango ( discuss ) 00:12, 2 August 2011 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. However, the reviewer felt that a few things need to be fixed before it is accepted. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.)
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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Dr. Miracle's, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  Chzz  ► 02:59, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
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