User talk:Theroadislong/Archive 72

V.Venkatappa
Hello. While patrolling the page creation log, I noticed that you had declined Draft:V.Venkatappa on what seemed to be either a general notability guideline or notability (people) basis. However, the individual seems to meet the guideline for politicians. It needs inline citations, sure, but I'm not convinced the subject is not notable. Sdrqaz (talk) 21:21, 16 June 2021 (UTC)
 * They may meet the WP:GNG guidelines but the references do not show this, which is why it was declined, more sources are required. Theroadislong (talk) 21:23, 16 June 2021 (UTC)
 * You may be misunderstanding what I've written. I have not claimed that the individual meets GNG. I am stating that the individual meets NPOL, as Politicians and judges who have held international, national, or (for countries with federal or similar systems of government) state/province–wide office, or have been members of legislative bodies at those levels are presumed to be notable. Sdrqaz (talk) 21:27, 16 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Ah yes, correct he does meet WP:NPOL the article is a real mess, tidy it up and it can be accepted. Theroadislong (talk) 21:36, 16 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Theroadislong, I was under the impression that at bad formatting at AfC should not be a hindrance to the draft being accepted. The article would most probably be kept at AfD and it simply needs some tagging with maintenance templates. Sdrqaz (talk) 21:58, 16 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Correct again, you are free to move it to mainspace yourself and tag it. I will not. Theroadislong (talk) 06:34, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

Nigerian Network Operators Group (ngNOG)
Thank you for pointing out the errors, I'm new here. I'll add more references like you suggested and apply again. thank you so muchHackersidon (talk) 09:26, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft: Logipix
Hello Theroadislong,

Thank you for reviewing my draft about Logipix and pointing out the issue with WP:SOLUTIONS. Although the term "solution" appears in the name of the company's products, I agree that the article should focus more on the components to have a neutral point of view, and I’m planning to rewrite it that way. Please let me know if I can do anything else to make the article more neutral.

Also, I am having difficulties meeting the citation requirements. After the first review, I tried to improve the reference list (adding more relevant ones, and removing passing mentions). Now the article mainly contains reliable, secondary and independent sources such as the study about the economic relations of Hungary and India, the IPVM article about Logipix cameras and a thesis at University of Alaska. Can you please advise me how to make my reference list better to meet the requirements?

Thank you in advance, Besebe (talk) 12:50, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Your draft is basically just an advert for them, and as you are being paid I will not be helping further, I am a volunteer. Theroadislong (talk) 12:58, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
 * That is understandable, thank you for your help so far. Besebe (talk) 13:23, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

Thank you for your guidance
I am new to this job and I definitely need guidance, so I welcome your guidance, and the more you guide me, the more it will affect my progress.
 * Your draft Draft:Dashty Hawler starts with “The city of Erbil was from the Erbil plain as one of the villages affiliated with Ainkaveh.” and doesn’t mention Dashty Hawler? Please make it clear what the article is about before submitting again. Theroadislong (talk) 18:12, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

Fredirco Bundaberg
Good evening,

I'm trying to get my article on Frederico Bundaberg published however there seem to be some issues with it. Thank you for flagging them up to me, would you be able to point me in the right direction to getting the articale published. Thank you for your help so far, it's much appreciated.

Kind regards,

Editornotes — Preceding unsigned comment added by Editernotes (talk • contribs) 19:23, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

Rich Kleiman
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Rich_Kleiman_(1)

Appreciate your comments. Worked on it. Huge durant fan and hoping to see this published. Thanks for any assistance. Skoskoexoso122122222a (talk) 21:28, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

In response to the accusation of paid editing
Hi Theroadislong. Thank you for the message. I get why my article will be mistaken as paid editing but I'm just a fan of the brand. I used to include a lot of promotional content in the article as I didn't thoroughly understand how it works. If I'm allowed to submit the article again, I promise that it won't sound promotional at all. Thanks again! Goodlug (talk) 03:30, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

Nicole Hollant-Denis
Hello Theroadislong It is so difficult for women of color the get recognition for their work in the world of architecture. Can you see about approving the entry submitted by Diksha Jain on Nicole Hollant-Denis, Architect? Please advise at earliest. She will be loading an article from last month by Madame Architects about my career so far as an architect. Thank you for your consideration. Nicole Hollant-Denis — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.132.77.174 (talk) 02:15, 18 June 2021 (UTC)


 * hello! I hope all is well with you. I saw the above draft and did some work on it to clean up the problems. While it wasn't evident in the earlier draft, she looks to meet WP:NARTIST for being one of the two architects (the other was Rodney Leon) who designed the African Burial Ground National Monument. I managed to find three book sources that discuss it, and added some other sources. I verified all the claims, and removed the low-quality awards. Let me know what you think. (Oh, and since there seems to be some off-wiki collaboration going on, I left a COI note on the draft creator's talk page.) Thanks. --- Possibly (talk) 04:31, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the improvements, `I have accepted the article. Good work. Theroadislong (talk) 06:36, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

A beer for you!

 * Cheers! Theroadislong (talk) 07:15, 19 June 2021 (UTC)

Prophaze WAF
Dear Theroadislong

Please look at Prophaze WAF (Check the reference below as well), its a web application firewall company

In the proposed content removed all sales-specific material, only the technology is highlighted Please advise

https://www.businessworld.in/article/Make-In-India-Meet-5-Promising-Cybersecurity-Startups-Redefining-The-Indian-Cybersecurity-Space-/16-02-2021-378270/ https://www.analyticsinsight.net/top-100-cybersecurity-startups-to-look-out-for-in-2021/
 * Draft:Prophaze WAF is just blatant advertising and will deleted soon. Theroadislong (talk) 09:58, 19 June 2021 (UTC)

Curious questions
Hello @Theroadislong. I've just seen that the article I submitted was rejected by you. You mentioned that the references need to be from independent sources. In the submission, I cited articles from the New York Times, Aljazeera, CNN, Washington Post, Wall Street Journal and a lot more. I am surprised that you don't think those sources are independent enough.

Also, the report of the organisation was cited in this Wikipedia article - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2020_Lekki_shooting - as well as others. Could you advise me on how to improve the article? I feel the organisation deserves to have a Wikipedia page following how useful their reports were for my academic research as well as others.
 * Your draft Draft:SBM Intelligence was declined not rejected it reads like an advertisement for the company, do you have a conflict of interest by any chance? Theroadislong (talk) 15:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)

I do not have a conflict of interest. The rules are explicit about that. I would rework it to ensure it doesn't "reads like an advertisement for the company".

Patrice Murciano wiki
Hello! I tried to create Patrice Murciano's wiki page; He's pretty known in the art scene, if you google image with his name, you'll see +100k hits. I cited Midi Libre, which is a credible web and printed media but seems it might not be enough? Or is it the format / way it's written ? Any tips would be very welcomed! :) Thanks a lot in advance, A wiki beginner :) Halxpe (talk) 15:23, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
 * We don't have pages about subjects we have articles, your draft doesn't make it clear how he passes WP:NARTIST so cannot be accepted. You will need to find and cite several independent published reliable sources that discuss the artist in significant detail. Theroadislong (talk) 15:30, 19 June 2021 (UTC)

Request on 15:46:26, 19 June 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Mannitish
Hi,

All articles have clearly mention Ashish Sahdev as an actor/lead artist of the movie San 84 Justice. This has been coved by multiple online portals. Please guide; what all needed to qualify this article to get published.

Thank you

Mannitish (talk) 15:46, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
 * See WP:NACTOR debuting as a lead artist in a non notable film does not seem to be enough to pass. Theroadislong (talk) 16:14, 19 June 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for the edit on my proposed page on Dr. Kamran Mirza. I have added more citations and references and look forward to your favorable review. Much appreciated.

Draft:Maija Peeples-Bright
Thank you for your help and feedback, I appreciate it. I have resubmitted the AfC submission again after further clean up. Please let me know if you see anything else outstanding. PigeonChickenFish (talk) 21:09, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ Accepted thank you. Theroadislong (talk) 21:10, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
 * You're Wikipedia editing speed is so impressive! Thanks again! PigeonChickenFish (talk) 21:11, 19 June 2021 (UTC)

Kamran M. Mirza
Thank you for your helpful comment and review. I have removed the external links as required. Looking forward to a positive review.Fascin21 (talk) 03:12, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Declined page
Hello,

I've got a message that you declined the publication of the NARC Israel page. I would like to better understand why. you wrote that "This submission's references do not show significant coverage", but the two articles that I referenced in the page are literally about the foundation of NARC Israel.

Thank for your time, Micha
 * Your draft does not show with significant coverage in multiple published independent reliable sources how this organisation meets the Wikipedia definition of a notable organisation. Please review the criteria and declare any conflict of interest. Theroadislong (talk) 07:10, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Vishal Gupta
Hie I am Vishal Gupta, my article was going to be rejected many times, please help me how to publish. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vishalgupta2 (talk • contribs) 06:50, 20 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Like most of us you are not notable so we don't require an article about you. Theroadislong (talk) 07:11, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Reg Mani Kanteswara Rao Garlapati Profile - Modified Changes
Hi There,

I had modified the page to make it look with notable contributions instead of like a resume. This was my first wiki page and probably missed incorporating citations in the correct manner. Hopefully the latest edits to this page are notable for acceptance?
 * Your autobiographical Draft:Mani Kanteswara Rao Garlapati has been rejected, Wikipedia is not a CV hosting service. Theroadislong (talk) 12:01, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

--LewisT34 (talk) 13:17, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

I just made the changes

I don't understand what the problem is...
The sources I cited are to back up quotes from Glenn Bray and from a review comment made on the internet. Why is this a problem? I thought it proper to credit the sources.

Please advise in layman's terms. I don't understand coder talk.

Frank
 * Your article Draft:Glenn Bray has zero reliable independent sources, independent sources are what we base articles on NOT primary sources. A Wikipedia article about a person must summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about them, showing how it they meet Wikipedia's special definition of a notable person. Theroadislong (talk) 21:43, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Submission of a draft
If possible, can you please review and submit this draft? Thank you. Excellenc1 (talk) 08:36, 21 June 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ Theroadislong (talk) 08:44, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft: Timothy Kramer response
Dear Theroadislong,

Thank you for your reviewing the draft and for your comments. I have removed the external links from the body of the article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Timothy_Kramer).

A few questions:

1) Are PDF’s as citations included in the body of the article allowed? Or should they be moved to footnotes? 2) Regarding the question of former students not being sourced, what do you mean? How could I improve and source this portion of the page?

Thank you very much for your time and expertise!

MusicTypewriter (talk) 09:30, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Hi! I've added sources (which include articles from Vogue, Elle, Architechtural Digest India, Its Nice That, Netflix show featuring him etc.). Please let me know if that helps with the draft and if I can do anything else. Thanks

Hey Theroadislong. You contacted me about my work on the Tobias Grau page. Thanks for checking but I am not a paid advocate - just want to improve resources on sustainable lighting, design and architecture. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ea87af (talk • contribs) 17:02, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Tobias Grau Draft
Hey Theroadislong. You contacted me about my work on the Tobias Grau page. Thanks for checking but I am not a paid advocate - just want to improve resources on sustainable lighting, design and architecture. I'll tone down any unnecessary adjectives and add more references, as suggested. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ea87af (talk • contribs) 17:04, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Tobias Grau Draft
Hi there, Theroadislong. I received a few rather aggressive messages from your account, which are a little surprising. My previous work on Wikipedia has always been in a polite and collaborative spirit. I'm curious what your precise problem with my entry is - not least because there are numerous pages devoted to other companies on Wikipedia also involved in design and sustainability. See for example:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USM_Modular_Furniture

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vitra_(furniture)
 * You have no previous work on Wikipedia, you started editing Draft:Tobias Grau today, just after User:Tobias Grau was blocked, which is why I suspected that you are the same user with a different name. See other stuff exists as well. Theroadislong (talk) 18:19, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Marquee Insurance Group
Can you fix up my page or write me one to help me create a wiki page for Marquee Insurance Group?

Marqueeig (talk) 20:16, 21 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Absolutely NOT. Wikipedia only has articles about notable topics. Theroadislong (talk) 20:17, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

FYI
This likely won't be seen by SPI clerks, as SPI cases use a number of templates that populate the cases and put them in the right place. Click "show" on "how to open an investigation" at SPI. I can fill this one out if you like, just ping me. --- Possibly &#9742; 21:49, 21 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you, I messed up, it's been quite a while since I filed a SPI! Theroadislong (talk) 21:59, 21 June 2021 (UTC)
 * No worries. It is something that I also file so rarely that I too often forget its ins and outs. Stand by.  --- Possibly &#9742; 22:05, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Thank you very much for taking a look at my wiki draft.
I have added citations and made changes as you had asked, would it be possible for you to check? MrBlaze111 (talk) 22:21, 22 June 2021 (UTC)

Request for assistance to rectify error
Hi Theroadislong.

I'm requesting your assistance with publishing the page you see as the USER:/KingdomKome and have nominated for SpeedyDeletion.

I have contested this to save the text but I am requesting what information I can put on the USER page that will be more accurate. (I am working for Cameron Scott and Kagiso Rabada's company Kingdom Kome and as a user want to contribute to the Wiki community. Please advise on the next steps as I see you have a reputation for assisting people.

KingdomKome (talk) 18:44, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Your user page is not a place to create articles so will be deleted soon, I moved your draft to here Draft:Cameron Scott, actor, filmmaker where you can work on it. Theroadislong (talk) 18:48, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

Submission
Thank you for the review it may just be too soon, I do however think it should have a separate article as it will be a non ministerial department with a huge responsibility and function that is too complex to just squash onto the Competition and Markets Authority or United Kingdom Internal Market Act 2020 page.


 * My intent was to start it as a stub article which can provide information on what is know so far and then build on it in September when it is due to start operation when all information should be known. I will continue to work on it and instead work on releasing it in on it’s commencement date.
 * ChefBear01 (talk) 21:25, 21 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Good plan, thank you. Theroadislong (talk) 21:44, 21 June 2021 (UTC)



It seems from my time on Wikipedia that it is far more stringent with WP:OR & WP:GNG or WP:NOTE for the topic sources then the sub areas. And all this is seems subject regardless to whether there is consensus between editors as to whether it ends up in a WP:RFC and possibly WP:RFD. ChefBear01 (talk) 21:22, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft review
Hi! I would love if you could review my draft, I had a similar page be approved! I followed the same structure https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:ProFutsal_Club — Chilliwidth (talk) 21:59, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft Review - Not an advert
Hi!

I actually helped create this https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Helv%C3%A9cia_Futsal_Club and I really like futsal but it sadly does not have enough courage, i'm going around and hopefully will be creating pages for the major names in Futsal in the UK. I have referenced correctly, reliable sources such as BT Sport which are major football coverage media here in the UK. With links to real universities and more. I followed the same template as the Helvecia one since I helped make it and that one was approved! Thanks :) Chilliwidth (talk) 22:34, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
 * FYI that user has blanked the Futsal drafts and user page, then retired themselves and vanished their account. --- Possibly &#9742; 05:26, 24 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Vamsi Krishna Akella
Hi, I have just seen the notification that I was paid an undisclosed amount for my article and my article was nominated for speedy deletion. May I know what made you guys think that I have been paid an undisclosed payment? The reason I have created is I have worked as Asst. Director for a film named "Aggipulla", which didn't release due to some issues and out of that gratitude am creating a page of him on Wikipedia.

And you said references from google or Youtube cannot be considered. I don't know from where I can bring the reference except google. May I know what kind of references are needed for approving my article?

Thanks, Shabarish.
 * If you have worked on one of his films then you have a very clear conflict of interest which you need to discose on your talk page. References required need to be reliable and independent. Theroadislong (talk) 07:08, 24 June 2021 (UTC)

Article Rejected: Heartcentre
Hello Theroadislong

I am a newbie and would love to know the reason why my first article was rejected so I may understand how to correct this.

USER:/heartcentre

Thank you.
 * Your draft Draft:Georgia Carr was rejected because, it has zero sources and no indication how they would pass WP:NSINGER articles are created by reporting on what reliable sources have said about a topic. The tone is also not appropriate, read WP:YFA for help. Theroadislong (talk) 07:59, 24 June 2021 (UTC)

Request on 10:31:33, 24 June 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Luca.pisu
Dear Theroadislong, first of all, thank you very much for reviewing the article I submitted and sorry for taking so long to get back to you.

I could see from your feedback: "they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject".

I am confused as, at this point, I am not sure whether I did include the reference links in the right place, proofing the info included. I could read and find articles about Michele Ardu on the most important and reliable publications of Italy, Greece and Saudi Arabia as well as official Government Cultural Offices websites. Some of the links I included are from: La Repubblica, La Stampa, TPI and SkyArte which are among the main and most diffused publications in Italy; LIFO, which is the most important and prestigious Newspaper in Greece and ArabNews (the most read Gulf Region newspaper in English). I actually could find more articles about Michele's work also many secondary publications, so I attached a selection of it in the article (they are in both Italian and English language). These publications are SpaghettiMAG, MAGZINE, eNews interview and more. On top of it, Michele Ardu is known to be a National Geograohic contributor in several editions of USA, UK, Brazil, Portugal, Italy, Spain, Germany, France, Netherlands, China, Russia, Indonesia, Traditional Mandarine...), so I attached also those links that show his work.

Please let me know if I have made any mistake in the process of making the page and attaching the links and how I could resolve it to see the article published. I thank you for your support and look forward to hearing from you, Best regards, Luca Pisu

Luca.pisu (talk) 10:31, 24 June 2021 (UTC)

dedicated book
Hello,

Regarding your message to me, is "Specification, Algebra, and Software Essays Dedicated to Kokichi Futatsugi" not indicative that he is well known? Simon1791 (talk) 20:40, 24 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Publishing a book confers zero notability, unless that book has ben reviewed in depth and reported on by independent reliable sources. Theroadislong (talk) 20:43, 24 June 2021 (UTC)

Well, the logic of Wikipedia defies my sense of logic. If 31 experts dedicate a book, by that logic that means nothing. So I give up. He must be just an ignorant person with lots of publications. But I am sure you did no make the rules, the crowd at large must have done. Thanks. Simon1791 (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 21:00, 24 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft: Kamran M. Mirza
Thank you for the helpful comment. In the pathology sphere, all the awards are quite notable, but I see how the trim would be helpful. I have trimmed to the most notable of all awards. The Brownie Anderson Award is a national award for medical education from the Association of American Medical College and Dr. Mirza was the first recipient of this award last year. The Pathologist Power List is an international honor that is given from an international review of candidates. Hope this trim helped the page. Much appreciated Fascin21 (talk) 15:37, 20 June 2021 (UTC)
 * By not notable I meant that none of them have Wikipedia articles so confer no notability to the topic. Theroadislong (talk) 16:04, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Oh, sorry for the misunderstanding. I understand now. Hmmm. In that case, I am notsure how I can fix or address this. I checked out some other American Pathologst pages, like https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Valerie_A._Fitzhugh#Awards_and_honors - and none of them seem to have Wiki-notable awards. Hope this doesn't disqualify the page. What should I do to address this? Thanks for your guidance. Fascin21 (talk) 19:17, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Thanks again for your thoughtful suggested edits. Hoping for a favorable review if all issues resolved (re: draft:kamran m. mirza) Fascin21 (talk) 23:06, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Wanted to follow-up on this draft page. Anything else we can address? The notability is in line with (if not better than) other American Pathologists. Looking forward to your next review. All the best. Fascin21 (talk) 03:01, 25 June 2021 (UTC)

Paid articles
Dear Theroadislong. Regarding my articles, yes, you are mistaken regarding my status. For the record, I am a freelance writer currently living in Brussels but with an interest in Nigerian civil society. Thank you.

Oskar Jacobsen.


 * Yes, it was the fact that you are a "freelance writer" which made me suspect. Theroadislong (talk) 13:13, 25 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Kamran M. Mirza
Dear Theroadislong - looking for a positive response re. this page. I trimmed the awards and added my COI statement like user:possibly recommended. All the references have been edited and the citations fixed. All outside links are now removed. Thanks.Fascin21 (talk) 01:45, 26 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Kamran M. Mirza
Thank you for the comment. I removed the "award winning" sentence and have tried to source the childhood and early career. If this does not meet criteria, should I just remove the section? What do you recommend? Hopefully the draft is now acceptable for publication. Fascin21 (talk) 23:25, 26 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Masaaki Kijima
Hi Theroadislong, I was hoping you would give some more details regarding your comment on my draft page for Professor Kijima. I have a goal of enriching the WP content in the field of reliability engineering and professor Kijima is one of the landmarks in the field. I was going to extend an invitation to students from Hiroshima University who knows the professor to improve the article, given that I couldn't find much about professor Kijima.

I would like to hear your feedback on my approach and get some more explanation on your comment "please copy edit for sense and repetition". Sarouk7 (talk) 15:21, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
 * The first paragraph of your draft Draft:Masaaki Kijima has a partial repetition of a sentence and so makes no sense, the draft also has zero independent sources, independent sources are what we base articles on, not what people (such as his students) know about him. Theroadislong (talk) 15:26, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Theroadislong, I made a mistake in the first paragraph, my apologies, I corrected it. I also added some references to the draft. I would like to resubmit the draft again, but I would like to hear your feedback first. Than you Sarouk7 (talk) 15:54, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
 * It still lacks independent sources? All of your sources are primary. Theroadislong (talk) 16:05, 27 June 2021 (UTC)

I hope I read your intent correctly. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 10:42, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
 * yes...thanks for that! Theroadislong (talk) 16:06, 27 June 2021 (UTC)

Regarding Article verification
Can you have a look on this Article, if suitable kindly approve this. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Sherpathri Dar zubair 17:32, 27 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft page
Hi Theroadislong,

Thanks a lot for your advice re citation references and will work on it to reduce the references. However, I'd be grateful if you could assist with an issue I have with project: Draft:Candice_Onyeama. Despite Wikipedia stating that drafts aren't indexed and so not available on search engines, I find that the draft I created for the mentioned project comes up on a google search for the subject's name, with all the private discussions, suggestions, declines, etc. Could you help me move it back to a private wiki space, so it's not coming up on the google search or advice me on how to get wiki[edia to hide my draft? Thanks a bunch for your help.

Yours very stressed. :(
 * Nothing comes up when I search ] and nothing on Wikipedia is private. What do you have to hide? Theroadislong (talk) 16:47, 27 June 2021 (UTC)


 * There's a couple of mirrors like . like you said, anything put on WP is public and this can happen. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 17:38, 27 June 2021 (UTC)

Jassa Dhillon
Hello Theroadislong, hope you are doing well. Actually Jassa Dhillon article created by me (by ip, 1 2 months ago I remembered my forgotten username password). While creating this article, I took the help of experienced users and. Kashmorwiki itself is an NPR. And he himself approved it. So I don't think it's not notable. Please think once. ––  𝚅𝚁𝙹 𝙱𝚊𝚗𝚍𝚑𝚞  01:44, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
 * User:Kashmorwiki was blocked for sockpuppetry, so his acceptance of the article is worthless. Theroadislong (talk) 18:03, 27 June 2021 (UTC)

Don't you write about Indian sports men — Preceding unsigned comment added by 43.241.192.161 (talk) 18:27, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I don't as it happens, because I know nothing about them. Theroadislong (talk) 19:08, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Hi there, I will make proper changes to Jerry Blair page, please don't delete. I will make requested changes. Once I figure out how to properly use Wikipedia! Thanks in advance for your help. (2600:1000:B14E:7BCB:3DFA:F952:D19E:7F7C (talk) 09:39, 26 May 2021 (UTC)) Greer

SysCAD
Thanks for looking over Draft:SysCAD - I have updated the reference to the original article on the company's page rather than LinkedIn. Any other advice on how to proceed with having this published would be greatly appreciated.

Review Draft:Jackson Groves
Hello,

thank you for reviewing Draft:Jackson Groves. I appreciate your contributions to WP. Due to the low sources, it got declined by you and after reading to your suggestions i have come up with the new references.

I request you to please review it again. Thank you. Mohirfan03 (talk) 00:05, 13 February 2021 (IST)

Re: Paid Editing
Hi,this is Cxxisroy, I'd like to response your question here, I am not paid, I just someone from the city called longyan where is also the FULONGMA's Headquarter. My thoughts to create fulongma in WIKI is just want to let people know about the city and the company people there are so proud of.

Best Regards,

Regarding my recent article on Prime Minister Special Schoalrship scheme Your review: paid advert
Your review: paid advert Good evening sir, Sir, I am not a paid editor for any organization and I am not being paid for any editing. I am a student from J&K who is studying under this scholarship from the Army Institute of Technology, Pune

With reference to your rejection on my PMSSS Article
With reference to this talk page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Wikipmsss#Paid_editing I would like to add that Sir I am not a paid employer for any organization I am a student from J&K who is pursuing his Engineering from Army Institute of Technology, Pune under this scholarship. This scholarship was launched in 2011 there is no article yet in Wikipedia for this scholarship. I want to publish about this on Wikipedia but I am a beginner in Wikipedia, Please help me with this sir.

You can remove any links if they are not appropriate sir. I will be very thankful

I am a student Nikhil Kotwal and is not a paid employer. This is a government scholarship and i am studying under this scholarship. I have also requested to change my username
With reference to the https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Wikipmsss Sir My name is Nikhil Kotwal and studying under this scholarship and I want to spread awareness about this scholarship as it has been 9 years now and no one has written an article about this scholarship yet on Wikipedia. I am a beneficiary of this scholarship and is not been paid by anyone to write an article for this. Sorry for my username I am new to Wikipedia and only created an account to write the article about PMSSS that's why. Now I have requested to change my username Please help me in publishing the article. I can remove the content if it is still looking like an advert

Please help I will be thankful

Removed Citations from IMBd and Instagram
Removed Citations from IMBd and Instagram, as per comment.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kv2000/Katie_Hunt_Wallpaper

Hello, you declined the article "Ikar Industries" What can I do to improve the article to fullfil wiki-criterias? Need your advice and help. By the way, I am not payed for the article and I don´t get anything for it. Mario Diel, one of the founders is my friend and asked me for a favor.

Sir my username is changed now, hope this will not make any confusion as my objective was to spread the awareness about the scholarship under which i am studying and doing any advert
Sir as i am new to Wikipedia I was not sure whom to approach for help, I have also requested another sir for help in the following talk( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Justlettersandnumbers ) who is involved in this matter.

With reference to my article on Prime Minister Special Scholarship https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Prime_Minister%27s_Special_Scholarship_Scheme There was confusion with my previous username as I was wrongly judged with my article as an advert. I am not a paid employer, I am a student who is studying under this scholarship only I am new to Wikipedia Please help me in publishing my article and spread awareness through your medium.

Thanks!
Thank you for the comment on the Susie Estelle Palmer Hamilton page - I'm new, and it's my first attempt at an article, so that was a big help! :)

I got the wrong process in editing, I added information about Sudan bookshop its original information but I was not cite source because for lake of information because about Sudan bookshop, please just I'm trying to increase the information about my country in Wikipedia by following all the rolls and legislation. tell me what I should to do? please you help is highly appreciated

MIX FM Radio Page
Hello

I am trying to add the page for Radio channel in Saudi Arabia. Here is the link https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:MIX_FM_Radio But it's not getting approve as they are saying lack of reference. I gave already many reference.

Adding ExSeed to wikipedia
Hi,

you rejected a submission I made today and I was hoping you could advise if the changes I have made will make it suitable. It's the first time ive submitted a page and appreciate any help you could give.

Thanks in advance

Thanks!
Hi, thanks for your help listing the citations! Really appreciate it :)

Resubmit a draft Pierre Culot
Hello Theroadislong,

I'm Ed.Ecrimage, thank you for your interest in my draft about the sculptor and studio potter Pierre Culot. I've just submited a new draft. Itried to simplify my work and specify references. I'm not a specialist of wikipedia, but i'm working on archives of Pierre Culot in Belgium, i think it's very important to publish informations in english about this international artist. I also asked help for translation. Thank you in advance for your reading and your help, best regards, E.E

Cheers for the suggestions on the Steve Ravic page
Had a go at removing some of the overkill citations and removed those sources you cited were unreliable. Is there anything else that you reckon it could use?

Frank Martin artist
Thanks for your speedy review and suggested improvements. This is my first article so guidance is appreciated. I also need to declare my close relationship to the subject who was my grandfather. What is the best way to do this?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Tyger_Tyger
I tried to eliminate the wikipedia link you pointed out and researched how to do this but was unsuccessful. Can you direct me to a link or instructions regarding how to edit the change you directed?

Draft: Kalium Sulphurium
respected Theroadislong, I have written this article about homeopathic remedies. One of the valuable Dr. Schuessler 12 primary tissue remedies is the name of that Kalium Sulphurium ( Kali Sulph) Like homeopathic medicine Arsenicum album, it is also an important Homoeopathic medicine.

So,I request you to see my draft well. Thank you !

Draft:Browzan
Hi there, I understand blogs imdb, imvdb are not reliable sources. Please check the rest of the sources I have cited, they include a local newspaper, art magazines and publications to boot.

Draft Jisbar
Hi Theroadislong, I did modifications for the draft Jisbar (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Jisbar). I deleted the mentions too promotional as famous / well-known for / ''luxurious' ... Can you please let me know if the draft can be submitted ? Thanks a lot, have a nice day;

How Can Someone Be paid on Wikipedia?
Hello Theroadislong, thank you for your apt contribution to my article except I am stunned by your comment of undisclosed paid interest, is that a common thing on Wikipedia? How do you determine a new user's status as being paid? Is Wikipedia solely for paid editors? If it is for paid editors, how does one get paid or even disclose such? I need your response please as I am yet to determine these. Meanwhile I have added additional sources to the article Draft:Elijah Chinezim Onyeagba like you requested/advised. Thank you. Bibihans (talk)Bibihans

Editing War Note
You just warned me of engaging in an edditing war. I wasn't, I was asking how to avoid one and how to engage with a user.

Benjamin Kentish
Thanks very much for your feedback. I have updated the article to include some more sources! Appreciate your advice and kind words.

Draft:Shochiku_Studio
Thank you for your confirmation for Shochiku_Studio.

Dr Hasan Murad Page
Hello Theroadislong,

Hope you're doing well. Kindly guide me through the procedure of submission so my page gets published in time. Thank you.

Hamza,

Updated version submitted :)
Hi Theroadislong,

Thanks for reviewing the leaving feedback for my draft SkyCiv, based on your feedback, I've added more references to support the article. Please let me know if there's anything else I can improve on. Thanks, Zoe

Paras Singh
Yes Draft Paras Singh is notable for one event

Ian not doing paid editing

Draft:Walter Ezequiel Matthysse Bianchettin
This draft Draft:Walter Ezequiel Matthysse Bianchettin is finalize for creating! Review and create please, thanks

drat:androidwedakarayo.com
Hello Theroadislong,

I created my first wikipedia draft, androidwedakarayo.com. I need to make it a complete and perfect article. Could you please help me?

Queries on my submission at Articles for creation: ChrisJon Descamps (May 23)
Local news's web pages about the articles were added for references as per request, both Thai and French languages. Why has it been rejected again?

Regards,

Please review my draft and please help me to improve it any further.
Hi, Can you please give your re-reviews on my Draft:Generic Aadhaar. I've removed the major Advert looking content from the draft. Also, please assist me in improving the draft.

Message received, I guess?
I am honoured? Request to reply was not specified, nor the understandings of your message?

It’s clear now.
Hello @ Theroadislong!

I understand now, I get it why the article may seem suspicious and unacceptable, but I would like to clarify that I have no connection with this business. Despite all, I hope I’m allowed to recreate a wiki page with this same topic. I’ll give my best next time!

Best, Megi.

Draft:Anthony Martinez (Boxer)
Hi User:Theroadislong! Thank you for your help on my article, I went ahead and fixed my mistakes and resubmitted the article. I appreciate your help and thanks again.

Reviewing an article
Hi Theroadislong,

Please can you review again this page after I added credible and different sources to meet your point:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:High-Level_Panel_on_Digital_Cooperation#Reviewing_an_article

Regards,

Netsells
Hi there,

I have had my recent edit flagged as being a risk that I have received compensation. I haven't- just a fan of the Northern tech space and noticed Netsells was missing. I'd be happy to make further adjustments if there are specific areas to change :)

Thanks, Scott

paid editing!!!!
I can assure you that I have NEVER been paid by anyone to do their wikipedia page as I'm not even an expert and merely do subjects I know, whose works interest me as fellow black women whom I want the world to discover. To suggest otherwise is both wrong and unfounded. My initial writing style may indicate my passion and bias about their works, which is something I have corrected to give an impassionate and neutral slant as demanded by wikipedia. But that does not in any way imply that I am paid. Please let me know why you have reached this conclusion, and also assist me in removing one of my drafts: Candice Onyeama from google search as I initially asked your help with, since one of your editors has gone ahead and published a draft on search engines against your policy. Thank you — Preceding unsigned comment added by AFRICAN001 (talk • contribs) 11:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for confirming that you are not being paid, there is nothing anyone can do about Google searches, all content becomes public once you click publish and Wikipedia has no control over how it is presented in searches. Theroadislong (talk) 11:45, 28 June 2021 (UTC)

Thank you
Thanks so much for approving this article. This encourages me to continue writing similar articles for creative black women in the hope of bringing their works to a wider audience. Remain blessed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AFRICAN001 (talk • contribs) 14:10, 28 June 2021 (UTC)

Submission of a draft
Hello! Can you please approve my my draft? Thank you. Excellenc1 (talk) 14:16, 28 June 2021 (UTC)

Stratasys
Hi Theroadislong. I'm currently attempting to work thought the backlog at CAT:EDITREQ, and I have noticed that one of requests is at. Since you worked on the request, I just wanted to know what do you think the current status is? Do you think it could be closed? JBchrch  talk  15:33, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Yes I think that could be closed now thank you. Theroadislong (talk) 15:38, 28 June 2021 (UTC)

A kitten for you!
Just like that! :)

Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 16:55, 28 June 2021 (UTC) 

Thank You!
Just wanted to say thank you for approving my article, really appreciate it.

Have a great day! Dblu9494 (talk) 17:22, 28 June 2021 (UTC)

Submission of a disambiguation draft page
I have created a draft page on a disambiguation on the title 'Tabacalera' (my draft). But an article with the same name already exists (this one). Can you please sort it accordingly and possibly submit the draft? Excellenc1 (talk) 05:28, 29 June 2021 (UTC)

Article for Creation 'New Horizon Art Car'
Dear Theroadislong, I kindly ask for your help in my quest to get my article approved. You mentioned that my article reads like an advertising, and since I have been writing about the art project, I only realized what that means after a tea house member kindly remarked that I should remove all mentions of the BMW and its specifications. This is an art project that is dear to me, and which is why I'm putting so much time in it. Another kind member reduced the article to its core removing all references to BMW. Might I ask your help in reading the current version and letting me know if this has a chance of getting approval? Thank you so much! BettinaGsott (talk) 06:17, 29 June 2021 (UTC)

Submission of a draft
Hello! Can you please review and approve my draft? Thank you. (P.S.: Sorry if I am annoying you with my submission requests but I am just impatient with submissions, and for me, you are the most known reviewer). Excellenc1 (talk) 14:47, 29 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Gopinath Ravi
Hi,

Thanks for spending your time and reviewing my article. Draft:Gopinath Ravi

You gave declined comment that why winning Mr India Asia Pacific has 8 sources. I'm not clear on your point. Is that wrong giving many citations? Clarify me please. Kamesh Aravind P (talk) 14:48, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
 * See WP:REFBOMB. Theroadislong (talk) 15:21, 29 June 2021 (UTC)

Thanks Theroadislong, it is helpful for me. I have learnt a new thing.

And now I have cleared the WP:REFBOMB in Draft:Gopinath Ravi. Can you kindly verify it again please?

Thanks in advance. Kamesh Aravind P (talk) 17:06, 29 June 2021 (UTC)

Deprodding of G. Ware Travelstead
I have removed the tag from G. Ware Travelstead, which you proposed for deletion. I'm leaving this message here to notify you about it. If you still think this article should be deleted, please do not add back to the page. Instead, feel free to list it at Articles for deletion. Thanks! -- Tautomers (T C) 00:18, 30 June 2021 (UTC)

Repeating a request
Hello! Can you please review and approve my draft? Thank you. (P.S.: Sorry if I am annoying you with my submission requests but I am just impatient with submissions, and for me, you are the most known reviewer). Excellenc1 (talk) 07:34, 30 June 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments on the question I asked. I really appreciate it.Lord Klukpui (talk) 20:42, 30 June 2021 (UTC)

Leo Regan draft
Hello there, You have just reviewed and declined a draft I am writing as a wiki entry for Irish filmmaker, writer and photographer Leo Regan and I am not sure why. Regan is an Emmy nominated, BAFTA and Directors Guild award winning documentary maker and photographer who has exhibited at the Victoria and Albert Museum, has been on the judging panel of the country's foremost documentary award, the Grierson and has a solid body of both documentary and drama work to his credit. He is also a respected cameraman and screenwriter. The secondary sources I have added today to the draft of the biography are all that there are, not because Regan is not of interest but because he is an intensely private individual who rarely if ever does interviews or profiles. His work has been reviewed and written about in The Independent, The Guardian, The Times, The Telegraph, the New Statesman, the television industry's Broadcast newspaper and also in publications in his home country, Ireland. His work his also significant in that it tackles issues such as homelessness, drug abuse and mental health. They aren't the easiest documentaries to watch but they are consistently viewed even today. That he is a figure of note is obvious but how to deal with the fact that he is a filmmaker who refuses to do interviews because he wants the work to speak louder than he does? What else can I add to get through to the next stage. All suggestions greatly appreciated Captbalbo (talk) 21:46, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
 * This may be a moot question at this point. I cleaned this draft up, checked all sourcing and moved it to article space. --- Possibly &#9742; 22:40, 30 June 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Kamran M. Mirza
Following up on edits. Thank you for your time.Fascin21 (talk) 03:11, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Abubakar Muhammad Zakaria Mojumder
Hi, Thank you for your comments. Reagarding your first instruction, I tried to provide as much as information about his proffessional life. And regarding 2nd comment, Abubakar Muhammad Zakaria Mojumder provided all this information personally to me. I do not know how I can provide reference about these informations.

Thanks
 * We cannot use ANY info that came from him directly, ALL content needs to be published in reliable sources. Theroadislong (talk) 15:08, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

More references
I add more references on draft. Can you check them? Azemla (talk) 17:48, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Kamran M. Mirza
Hoping all edits now make this an acceptable publication. Thanks. Fascin21 (talk) 17:59, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

Article Review
Hi Theroadislong, I believe you were the reviewer on an article titled "Sasha Gordon" and denied it due to the sources not being substantial enough for you. Now that this artist's works have been acquired by major museums and there are 10+ more substantial sources, is there any way to restore the article draft or do I need to start again from scratch? My experience here has greatly diminished my motivation to contribute further to Wikipedia.
 * Your draft was deleted because it hadn't been edited for 6 months you can get a refund by clicking the appropriate link here ] good luck, creating an article is the very hardest task here. Theroadislong (talk) 07:44, 4 July 2021 (UTC)

Request on 16:29:46, 1 July 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Bblqk37
I am very disappointed at rejection of my submission. I have referenced it. Why would I bother to record something that will be lost if not recorded

Bblqk37 (talk) 16:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Your draft Draft:Staflo drilling rig was declined not rejected, I don't understand your second question sorry. Theroadislong (talk) 08:48, 4 July 2021 (UTC)

No improvements
Hi Theroadislong,

My last decline was about my references, not enough reliable sources, so I have added more, I also removed discogs and soundcloud reference after your helpful comment :) Im struggling as to what else would be appropriate or helpful. thankyou againFlowerMoon593 (talk) 12:42, 4 July 2021 (UTC)

Regarding Article verification
Can you have a look on this Article, if suitable kindly approve this. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Sherpathri Dar zubair 02:39, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Article on Arham Shri
Hello I just wanted to tell you that Arham Shri is a very notable personality in North India and is the founder of Arham Dhyan Yoga in the country. Arham Dhyan is one of the leading institutes of yoga in India and is a major yoga promoter under Ministry if Aush, india. Pls this article needs tos be up on the wiki as people do believe wikipedia for bios of these personalities https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Arham_Shri_108_Muni_Pranamya_Sagar_ji_Maharaj#Arham_Shri pls go through this link and just make a a search on google related to him
 * It is not for me to find sources for your draft. Theroadislong (talk) 07:32, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Draft Hans-Peter Wipplinger
--LMPpaulafreisl (talk) 11:53, 5 July 2021 (UTC) I kindly ask you to reconsider your review on the Draft on Hans-Peter Wipplinger https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Hans-Peter_Wipplinger it it a mere translation of the German article, that was written and edited by numerous people over the last years. Thank you in advance
 * English Wikipedia has stricter guidelines for inclusion, independent sources are required and you also need to properly disclose your conflict of interest re the terms and conditions of editing here. Theroadislong (talk) 12:02, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Hi Theroadislong
I would like to know how much did I improve the article Sword Art Online Progressive: Aria of a Starless Night with my contribution? Can you suggest me some tips to improve further?
 * Your edits look to be mostly fine, except a "see also section" isn't required if all it contains are links to articles already mentioned in the article. Theroadislong (talk) 13:40, 5 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Should I removed it? Can you me some tips in editing? Katie Allie (talk) 17:15, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Draft: Maria Bennan Re: Paid Editing / In-line Citation
Dear Theroadislong,

I have taken well note of the comments on the subject submission. Please find below my responses.

Paid editing: With regard to the query on paid editing, I would like to kindly confirm that there is no financial compensation that I have received from the subject / any other entity towards contribution of the content.

Regarding the nature of edits made: Two primary edits were made in response to the comments made by the initial reviewer: 1. Any part of the text with a non-neutral tone was deleted. 2. The infobox was updated with the website of the subject. The website has the same content as the reference sources.

Relevance of this topic: The number of female chefs from India is quite low and this can be mainly attributed to the gender stereotyping still prevalent in the society. Therefore, an article on a female chef from India who has been featured on national platforms was contributed.

Regarding in-line citations: No further edits have been made at this stage as mentioned on the editor's note. I would be grateful to receive assistance on the in-line citations aspect.

Many thanks and looking forward to hearing from you, Nina's Storm


 * Your draft Draft:Maria Bennan "shows signs of having been written by someone associated with the subject", which is why you were asked about paid editing, you also need to declare any conflict of interest even if you are not being paid, you have taken a photograph of the subject so have clearly met them. You can find help with reference formatting here WP:REFB. Theroadislong (talk) 18:33, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Thank you so much for your quick response and kind clarifications on the above. Yes, a high definition photograph and something to represent her other interests were obtained by directly getting in touch with subject as rightly pointed out. Hopefully, this aspect of the comment can be treated as closed out for now? :)

Regarding the referencing, apologies for not being able to format correctly the first time around; shall refer carefully to the source provided and resubmit at the earliest.

Many thanks once again for your kind help and assistance on this matter.

Dear Theroadislong, All the references have now been corrected in line with WP's format. Thanks for your valuable guidance :) The references initially were wrongly formatted which gave the impression that the subject was claiming many of the stated points when the references were actually independent sources. Learnt a new thing today! :) Thank you!

Just trying to translate a Swedish page into English
Hey, I have no clue how to edit pages on Wiki. Just wanted to offer an English translation of this page: https://sv.wikipedia.org/wiki/Johan_Gr%C3%B6nvall

nothing much but a story about my great great great grandfather, but i got declined. How can i help translating this page into English or other languages?

Thanks and great day!

R Grönvall
 * Having an article in the Swedish Wikipedia is no guarantee that we can have one here, the guidelines on notability are often very different. Theroadislong (talk) 20:42, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Need help to know how can i make my article comply with the policies.
Hello, Theroadislong! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. I am trying to make my [|draft:Sarv_Webs] comply with the policies of Wikipedia. Please let me know what will be left and making the article declined. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tamannakhatri (talk • contribs) 09:29, 6 July 2021 (UTC)