User talk:Theroadislong/Archive 77

Taxobox
I saw you left me a message about a taxobox... what is that? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cerambycidfreak (talk • contribs) 15:14, 11 October 2021 (UTC)

Is a taxobox the Overview section? If so, how do you fix it? I accidentally messed it up... — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cerambycidfreak (talk • contribs) 15:15, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
 * I've fixed the taxobox for you, it was missing the closing brackets, it would help if the references were placed directly after the content they support rather than in a list at the end. Theroadislong (talk) 15:18, 11 October 2021 (UTC)

Got the Sources for ya,
Got the Sources for ya, they're correctly formatted and ready to go. Would you mind "accepting" the article or looking it over for more issues? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cerambycidfreak (talk • contribs) 15:48, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
 * I have accepted it but the sources are still not correctly formatted. Theroadislong (talk) 15:51, 11 October 2021 (UTC)

Photos
I'm not trying to upload them as my own work. I've got permission from the BugGuide contributors whose photos they are, but don't know how to say that when I upload the files for use. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cerambycidfreak (talk • contribs) 17:35, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
 * You do not have permission, the bugguide website says they are copyright, they would need to be released with a correct commons license first. Theroadislong (talk) 17:39, 11 October 2021 (UTC)

Image
Ok, Mr. TheRoadIsLong. I now have 2 images of Ceropales bipunctata (from BugGuide), and this time the posters gave me their explicit permission. I will upload them, and since I have given you this message, I hope you won't delete them. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cerambycidfreak (talk • contribs) 18:45, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
 * The uploader cannot give permission for use on Wikipedia only, the image would have to be free to use anywhere even for commercial use, and there is zero evidence that the copyright holder has agreed to that. Another user has already tagged the image for speedy deletion. Theroadislong (talk) 18:57, 11 October 2021 (UTC)

Mr., I have permission to use these images. What copyright would I put them under for them to be certifiable for use in my article? What, of those six options of copyright, is appropriate for an image to which I've been given the rights? I have the rights to the images, and really want to use them — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cerambycidfreak (talk • contribs) 19:22, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
 * The copyright holder would need to release the photographs with a Creative Commons license it is NOT sufficient for him to just allow you to use them. You clearly do NOT I have the rights to the images, sorry. Theroadislong (talk) 19:27, 11 October 2021 (UTC)

back to draft
Why was this page moved back to draft?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Desi-Rae_Young — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.229.39.92 (talk) 23:51, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Because as it comments at the top ... it was moved from draft by a paid editor User:Wiki Page Polisher bypassing the AFC process. I needs to be submitted and approved by an afc reviewer first. Theroadislong (talk) 07:11, 12 October 2021 (UTC)

Regarding FAME Publish magazine
Hi it has been four months since FAME Publish was rejected by you. I have added more citations. I have no experience of creating Wikipedia. Our competitor Indian Talent Magazine has wikipedia page without any independent source, only cited facebook links and their clients blog link, and most of the links are not active yet, they dont even have ISNI number. But we have ISNI number, and we have more independent sources, that is the reason I also submitted my magazine. Other contributors saying we are using paid articles, but they are not paid, all are organic one and based on interview with our editor. Kindly look into matter and solve the issue. I respect your decision what you will do. Thank you very much. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2409:4053:2C81:3D96:48C4:1030:F083:2216 (talk) 15:40, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
 * See other poor quality articles exist I have removed the content sourced to blog and Facebook and tagged for notabilty. Thanks for the heads up. Theroadislong (talk) 16:01, 12 October 2021 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Way_Out_(2015_film)
I'm stunned by this faulty article. It is filled with dead links. Most of its claims, including awards, are substantiated by dead links. How is this allowed to exist?--176.229.152.167 (talk) 20:11, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
 * I suggest you take your concerns to the article's talk page I have no particular interest or knowledge of the topic. Theroadislong (talk) 20:14, 12 October 2021 (UTC)

Mayya Poprotskaya
To be honest, this person is of newsworthy, but I can see that because of the subject matter, newsworthiness does not apply here. You will find every reason to delete the page simply because of subject matter...CeallaighM (talk) 21:25, 12 October 2021 (UTC)

As she is the first person (possibly in the world) but definitely for the country of New Zealand, to have her images specifically labeled as Child Pornography and BANNED via isp hash technology, she meets the definition and criteria for "Subject-specific notability guidelines".

This is the first person I have been able to find, where an ISP of a country takes hash encoding via https://archive.org/details/office-of-film-and-literature-classification_800392/page/n1/mode/2up

Facial, video, voice recognition and BAN anyone from the country of New Zealand from seeing these images.

It may not be the best subject in the world, it may involve things that make your skin crawl, but it is certainly news worthy and notable and that's what Wikipedia is. Wikipedia is not about feelings, it is about the world.CeallaighM (talk) 21:35, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
 * It has nothing to do with how "newsworthy" (see WP:NOTNEWS) the topic is or the subject matter, articles are created about people who pass the criteria at WP:GNG, the subject needs to have been covered in-depth with significant coverage. The sources in your draft come no where near being enough, being mere passing mentions, sorry. Theroadislong (talk) 21:39, 12 October 2021 (UTC)

— Preceding unsigned comment added by CeallaighM (talk • contribs) 22:04, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Mayya Poprotskaya may well be notable enough for an article, but the draft was declined because the sources do not evidence this yet, you are free to find more and better sources and re-submit, but attacking volunteer editors will not help in anyway. Theroadislong (talk) 22:13, 12 October 2021 (UTC)

User Page for Andrewincowtown
As per your notice, I have edited my User page.

By way of explanation, I can only offer that when I set up the page years ago, I thought of it as a traditional "Bio" page, and have not thought about it much since.

However, I completely agree that it was not in-line with Wikipedia guidelines. I hope it is now.

Best wishes, Andrewincowtown (talk) 17:37, 13 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Muna Khalid Albader
Hello, Theroadislong,

Just a reminder, it really helps after you move a page from main space to Draft space to tag the original page for speedy deletion, CSD R2. If you could do this in the future, it would be appreciated. Thanks. Liz Read! Talk! 01:59, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

StoneShot company page
Hi Theroadislong. Thanks for reviewing the page I created. I rewrote the page after your first rejection and added references. There's not much else in the public domain about StoneShot - one of the reasons I'm creating a Wikipedia page. Could you help? Thanks, Gavin — Preceding unsigned comment added by GavinJohn67 (talk • contribs) 11:13, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia only publishes articles for topics that have received significant coverage in reliable sources. Your draft does not show that, press releases are not reliable sources. Your company would need to pass the criteria at WP:NCORP, please also address the problem of  undisclosed paid editing. Theroadislong (talk) 11:31, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

StoneShot
Hi again. My apologies, I missed the point about being paid by StoneShot. I've updated my profile. StoneShot is actually my company. thanks, Gavin — Preceding unsigned comment added by GavinJohn67 (talk • contribs) 12:14, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Andrea Unger - Resources improved
Hello Theroadislong, you suggested me to improve the references into the Draft page I created: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Andrea_Unger ... please could you give me a feedback about new references? Thanks in advance Angio92 (talk) 14:52, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Jawad Show
Hello Theroadislong, please remove the word that violate wikipedia community but please add my page it is so important. — Preceding unsigned comment added by WhenJawadEdits (talk • contribs) 15:28, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Your draft Draft:Jawad Show was rejected. The only content is "Jawad Show is an informative website created by Jawad Ali. This is an encyclopedia with articles about notable topics. Theroadislong (talk) 15:33, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

recent article submission has been rejected
Hello my friend ,i am new to wikipedia ,i recently create page for my business .but after submit it it say" recent article submission has been rejected" please can you help me for this. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Podisira (talk • contribs) 15:18, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Draft:TRU TV was rejected because it was just an advert for your business. Wikipedia is not a place to advertise or tell about something, Wikipedia summarizes what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about a topic, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of notability. Please also review conflict of interest. Theroadislong (talk) 15:24, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Pinging the OP: . --CiaPan (talk) 17:47, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

New Wiki User. About my draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Speaking_practice
Hi Theroadislong,

I'm new in Wiki, sorry for the misunderstanding.

Can you please guide me through what exactly can be done to approve my article?

Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by KuzminAndrei (talk • contribs) 10:01, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Absolute pressure leak testing
Hi,

I have revised this document and added the required references. Is there anything else I need to do?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Absolute_pressure_leak_testing — Preceding unsigned comment added by Biccius (talk • contribs) 11:50, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

The Croods
Hey, man, the Croods Family Tree is out. you gonna greenlight that draft right now or...? BMA-Nation2020 (talk) 17:52, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅. Theroadislong (talk) 18:04, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

I'm sorry...
Dear Theroadislong,

I am sincerely sorry. I did not know anything of the copyright laws, and I know I caused a lot of trouble/was a nuisance. I hope you can forgive me. I've learned my lesson. Cerambycidfreak (talk) 01:02, 16 October 2021 (UTC)
 * No worries, copyright is a minefield. Cheers. Theroadislong (talk) 06:28, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

Dr. Richmond Kelly draft page
Dear Theroadislong,

I do know the page is lacking in sources, I'm trying my best to find more but can't find many so far.

As for what makes it notable, I'd say what may make the source notable is that it's from an actually book, though I can only find the usgwarchives page for Richmond's specific section as well as a PDF of the Volume 2 book of which Richmond's part appears in. I'd somehow link the PDF if I knew how to as it'd likely actually show the section from which I'm getting a mjority of my information from.

Though as I'll probably not be able to find other sources anytime soon, delete the page if you are able and really need to.

Sincerely,

KlenaLover2030 (talk) 09:34, 16 October 2021 (UTC)
 * No need for deletion, maybe some more sources will arise. Theroadislong (talk) 10:51, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

 * Well...Thank you!!! Theroadislong (talk) 17:11, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Philip Lonergan
Just to be clear, I am not scolding you, only two other editors. Robert McClenon (talk) 19:33, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

Joseph Mountain
That was quick. You removed the comment while I was still checking to see if cleanup was required (which it was, and you did it). Were you also looking at the draft when I accepted it? Robert McClenon (talk) 21:24, 16 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Yes I guess I must have been! Theroadislong (talk) 21:28, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

Page Numbers
Done! Would you mind accepting Draft:Chlaenius aestivus or seeing what else needs to be improved? Cerambycidfreak (talk) 22:05, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

cloudwood entertainment
Hello, i want to understand why my article was rejected and how to create a company page legit way. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Anishkatyal05 (talk • contribs) 15:42, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Your draft Draft:Cloudwood Entertainment was rejected because it was blatant advertising. Wikipedia doesn’t host company pages, not a single one, we have articles about notable topics. A Wikipedia article summarizes what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about a topic showing how they meet the special Wikipedia definition of a notable business. Theroadislong (talk) 15:46, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

Paid Edit
Dear, I am not paid or have done this editing on behalf of someone. I have a startup and i am doing this edit for my own company. let me know if this is something against the wiki guidelines. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Anishkatyal05 (talk • contribs) 17:02, 17 October 2021 (UTC)


 * What IS against the wiki guidelines is the fact that you are connected to the subject/topic you are writing about. You can't write about something you are connected to because then the info may not be neutral, it'll (likely) be bias. On Wikipedia, all info must be neutral = no opinions. You may not think you'll be bias to your own company, but who knows? We want to avoid that at all costs. Cerambycidfreak (talk) 22:07, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
 * adding to that, please read the notice Theroadislong left you and follow the blue links. "Paid" does not mean cash.  Since you are the owner, you do have a financial interest, thus you do need to disclose (read all the instructions).  Failing do so will is against the Terms of Service you agreed to when you established an account. S0091 (talk) 22:14, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

Pls Help us to publish this article
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Dinesh_Pathak

I have lots of ref link links which is on search pages.

https://www.ted.com/tedx/events/33490

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G8NtbgJDUd0

https://www.glbitm.org/activities_details.aspx?mpgid=37&pgidtrail=37&ntypeid=0&sdeptid=9&ttype=activities&newsid=676

https://www.jagran.com/uttar-pradesh/meerut-city-workshop-held-at-dewan-bs-institute-of-technology-19759400.html https://uiic.aktu.ac.in/%e0%a4%85%e0%a4%82%e0%a4%97%e0%a5%8d%e0%a4%b0%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%9c%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%ae%e0%a4%9c%e0%a5%8b%e0%a4%b0-%e0%a4%b9%e0%a5%88-%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%8b-%e0%a4%b0%e0%a4%b5%e0%a4%bf-%e0%a4%95/ https://uiic.aktu.ac.in/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%aa-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a8%e0%a5%80-%e0%a4%aa%e0%a5%8d%e0%a4%b0%e0%a4%96%e0%a4%b0-%e0%a4%af%e0%a4%be-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%81%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%b6/

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hLInRDLi_Ek

http://www.aimt.edu.in/career-counseling-for-prospective-placement-on-19-09-2019/

https://m.timesofindia.com/city/lucknow/edu-administrators-must-be-change-agents/amp_articleshow/77702247.cms

https://www.flipkart.com/bacchon-ke-sunahre-bhavishya-sutra/p/itmfytk6tsx3uqzr?pid=RBKFYSK9YAVWEEPF&lid=LSTRBKFYSK9YAVWEEPFBFKPO8&marketplace=FLIPKART&store=bks&srno=b_1_2&otracker=browse&fm=organic&iid=8786f9fd-9fe1-4cbe-8c19-8c51531fcfed.RBKFYSK9YAVWEEPF.SEARCH&ssid=chvif7luqo0000001617775814465

https://www.flipkart.com/baccho-ki-safalta-ke-matra/p/itmfytngkufezyf9?pid=RBKFYSHEPBQNZHGC&lid=LSTRBKFYSHEPBQNZHGCCVGN61&marketplace=FLIPKART&store=bks&srno=b_1_6&otracker=browse&fm=organic&iid=8786f9fd-9fe1-4cbe-8c19-8c51531fcfed.RBKFYSHEPBQNZHGC.SEARCH&ssid=chvif7luqo0000001617775814465

https://www.dineshpathak.info

https://zeenews.india.com/hindi/author/dinesh-pathak

https://hindi.oneindia.com/authors/lekst14950-lekhaka.html

https://abesit.in/events/16776-2/

https://www.srms.ac.in/engineering/placements/placement-news/page/2/

https://twitter.com/aajtak/status/1447423184743976960?s=21

https://www.aajtak.in/elections/up-assembly-elections/story/up-assembly-election-2022-tejaswi-surya-bjp-yuva-sammelan-ntc-1333314-2021-09-28

https://www.aajtak.in/elections/up-assembly-elections/story/bjp-mission-84-in-uttar-pradesh-cm-yogi-adityanath-is-trying-to-win-over-the-lost-ground-ntc-1333888-2021-09-29

https://www.aajtak.in/amp/elections/up-assembly-elections/story/up-assembly-election-2022-bjp-rath-yatra-muslim-minority-awareness-modi-yogi-ntc-1339783-2021-10-11?__twitter_impression=true — Preceding unsigned comment added by Riteshkumarbhanu (talk • contribs) 12:17, 19 October 2021 (UTC)
 * None of these appear to be independent or reliable, sorry but your topic just doesn't appear to be notable. Theroadislong (talk) 12:21, 19 October 2021 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Irakli_Beridze
Dear Theroadislong, the page was resubmitted and cleaned up according to your suggestions. It was very helpful. Many thanks. Would you be able to approve it, or advise how to proceed further. Regards, and many thanks in advance

Astro Switch On
Hi Theroadislong,

I was wondering what you mean by independent sources? I would think that the article that was released by their label would be considered independent? The first source that I used was from naver which was declined because apparently that was not reliable. Should I include the link from their official twitter account to make sure that this article gets approved? I mean I looked up their previous articles from their past albums and the naver source was approved there... Let me know thank you!

RE My Rupert Gather Article
Hi Theroadislong,

I was just wondering if you could give me some more insight into what I need to do to make my article publishable? I notice on one of the links you say that its not he right type of link or something, is there a youtube video you could direct me to that can explain how to change that?

Thanks,

Christian

Draft: Naosaku Takahashi
Hi again Theroadislong,

I deleted the first one fron Japanese Wikipedia. Thanks. The other two are from the home pages of still existing institutes for the needy, which were established by Naosaku Takahashi. By the way, as Naosaku Takahashi is a historikal figure (1886-1976), his Website informaton is limited. However, Naosaku Takahashi was an important figure of social work in Japan, during and after the war, WWII. Unfortunately, his writings, including his autobiography, and critical evaluations were published in Japanese only. But I, IyataYada, tried to cite the limited literature which is housed in National Diet Library of Japan; and CiNii of National Institute of Informatics, Japan, for everyone's reference to reach out the original sources. Although he is not a famous in the U.S.A. and other foreign countries, I belive that this English version will help the English speaking people in the Wikipedia community.

Best regards, IyataYada

Thanks!
Thanks for the message. I totally did that page wrong--thought I was submitting my user page info. (doh!). Thanks for your support. I'll check it out. I hope I'm doing THIS message correctly. haha

National Environmental Education Foundation
Not clear on what is considered advertising about our entry

Hello. We submitted an entry for the National Environmental Education Foundation. We made sure to source all the information and make sure we included only facts about an organization that was chartered by Congress in the 1990 National Environmental Education Act. I would like to better understand how to improve this as I've followed all the guidance I've read on Wikipedia. Thank you very much! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:14d:8a00:29d0:99d:d71b:8e9d:2020 (talk • contribs)

Giffy & Co,
Thanks for speedying the duplicated draft. I have rejected the 'main' one as was done previously. Tripped myself up there when moving to draft by 'hidden' subpage. Cheers. Eagleash (talk)

Draft:Adolf Shapiro ‎
The link is nevertheless to active Wiki article.

More importantly picture or article - the issue is minimum standard for inline citations

John Grandits article draft
Hi Friend, I'm trying to get some feedback on why our Wikipedia draft for children's poet John Grandits was rejected. My daughter and I put it together after she was assigned a research project in school to find biographical details on him. Since he had no Wikipedia page, we created one together (paying pretty careful attention to formatting and criteria). I've looked a bit at the notability guidelines and do think he has enough creative work to be notable. Any more feedback that could help us prove notability-- other than the awards, lists of article and publications? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:John_Grandits

Thank you for providing feedback on Draft:Boris_Maciejovsky
I appreciate the time you took to go over my submitted draft.

In response to your comment, I made some edits to include sources for the biography section.

In footnote 9, I included a link to the library at the University Wien. In footnote 10, I included a link to the PhD thesis at MIT Libraries. In footnote 11, I included a link to the author's CV that lists all previous academic appointments..

Again, many thanks for taking the time to improve the submission!

Draft:Thoughts of the Day
I have read WP:NOTBOOK and found the following criteria: The book has been the subject of two or more non-trivial published works appearing in sources that are independent of the book itself. This can include published works in all forms, such as newspaper articles, other books, television documentaries, bestseller lists, and reviews. This excludes media re-prints of press releases, flap copy, or other publications where the author, its publisher, agent, or other self-interested parties advertise or speak about the book.

Then why asking specifically for book reviews? I am not geeting

Tommy Adkins author
Ok I just read in your talk section "Wikipedia is not interested in the truth only reliable sources." Well that explains it. Thanks again..

page of Pradyumna Kishore Bal
Hello there:

We wish to create a page on Mr Pradyumna Kishore Bal who was a very notable personality from Odisha, India. He was an elected Member of Parliament of the Indian general election in 1977. Committed to social causes, Mr Bal founded the newspaper Pragativadi which is still in operation and is considered to be one of the leading dailies in Odisha. The page is intended to carry verifiable facts about Mr Bal. We would love to have it on Wikipedia.

Thank you.

Pranay

I've made changes to reflect your comments on my COIN-related page
Hi Theroadislong,

Thanks for letting me know that my article submission was too 'advertisy'. I created COIN as an open-source, non-commercial framework, but I guess my enthusiasm got the better of the article. I have rewritten it, and taken out any reference to anything that may sound commercial or advertorial. Just to clear any misconceptions, I have removed the references to my book on the subject.... I'm not doing this to sell books, but because I want people to use and enjoy the open-source framework.

Can you let me know if this is the better style, and publish if so? If not, can you let me know which part specifically is not good enough?

Coverage of the framework is fairly widespread, but within the context of the innovation-management industry.... I guess you need to take into account that this is a fairly small group. The magazines, blogs and conferences that published about COIN are in fact global, leading events. Bear in mind that I have not paid anything to anyone to provide this coverage!

Thank you very much!

Bob Martino article
I will fix this. Were there any other problematic areas?

BioFoodLab Draft
Hi Theroadislong, I created this draft and have no relationship (paid or other) to the subject matter. I have also rewritten the page for neutral tone, as per the editors' requests, as well as substituted any "contributor" references with others. Thanks!

Regarding editing of the title
Dear Theroadislong,

Thank you for your comment. I have canceled all the ® in the text and inserted some more professional information but can I leave the ® in the title?

I have read a lot about this brand and I have always found it next to the name. For example on this article from the Red Bull Racing Blog https://www.redbull.com/int-en/redbullracing/in-the-driving-seat-with-playseat

Also, do you have other advises to make it better from a professional point of view?

Best regards,

Rita

Cyberbiznes
Hello! As you ordered, I have removed internal links. There are only links to independent pages. Is this version acceptable for wikipedia? Best Regards Antoniewicz1977

Charles W Taylor Jr of Rice University is a Member of the Senior Executive Service of the United States, as documented on June 25, 1990. Where can his certificate be sent for verification?
Where can I send the certificate for verification

Urtain Draft from user Malbadi
Dear Theroadislong,

Thank you for your review to my draft. I removed the IMDb reference and only left the references to wellknown newspapers such us The New York Times or spanish newspaper El Mundo. Regarding not qualifying this article as a Wikipedia article, must be a missunderstanding.

Jose Manuel Urtain is listed amon the EBU heavyweight champion in Wikipedia. Is almost the only one of that list that has not his own article, as the rest of the champions have they own page.

Could you pleas help me telling me how can I make the article stronger?

Many thanks and best regards,

need help for ariticle submission
Toyoharu Tanabe

hi, i was writing this article about toyoharu tanabe which it got declined due to non-reliable references.

he had a japanese wiki article written on him which include references but they are in japanese does those goona consider as reliable sources(one of them is the honda's official japanese website).

if not does this espn article goona work which have mentions about him and this japantimes article also mentioned him.

and also this wiki template about honda also includes his name.

sorry, this is my first article so dont know many hope you help me.

Sir i need your help (talk) 21:11, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

Women in Computing Europe
Hi Theroadislong, Thank you for your comments. They are very helpful as I can now identify some of the specific issues. I will correct these and see what else I can do to improve the page. Regards, Ruth

Draft:Reborn (Digital Creative Agency)
Hi Theroadislong - thank you for reviewing and providing feedback.

I'm happy to make any changes but just want to make sure I edit the right things out.

We have modelled the submission on this agency based on other similar agencies, for example the listing for https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Huge_(digital_agency)

Also, it is worth noting that the citations used are all independent and respected news and industry news sources in Australia.

I've made a few edits to reduce the text, but let me know if more should be removed.

Thank you in advance for your help.

Article still not published
Dear Theroadislong, My article was still not approved as you have mentioned that it's not worthy for wikipedia and it doesn't have significant coverage. Sidarth sathoo has been covered by Amar Ujala which was started in the year 1999. The athlete itself has created history by becoming the first kashmiri pandit boy to achieve the title of Mr North and Mr Jammu. He also has been covered by 'Rising Kashmir' which is a 13 year old publication which is widely read in Kashmir and North India. Please let me know how these decade old publications are not significant?

Positive Learning
Hello, i deleted all the links and rewritten the article already. Can you please point down the advertisement in this article. Are you trying to bully me?

I was reading so many articles and they even do ads clearly there and you stilla approve it.

External links in body
I've removed them. Thank you for pointing this out. Mathman8574

Esther Gelcer
Hi is there anything that I can do to move Esther Gelcer Wikipedia Page forward? She asked me to create this page for her and I do not understand what.. This means ...you wrote... they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published. Thank I appreaciate your help navigating Wikipedia!

Draft:Abdʿobodat
Hi

Thanks for your feedback. I added two more sources to the article. But I just want to say that I’m not creating this article by itself and leaving it. As you may know it’s very rare that we actually get the names of individual architects who created the monuments of the ancient world. In this case we have two or three names from Hegra and Petra (both are world heritage sites, and one of them was voted to be one of the modern wonders of the world). For some reason there are no English sources or articles about these names but if this is accepted I can then link this article with others and with the other existing articles on the subject.

submission declined
hi there, I am writing this message because an article submission was declined by you. I have updated the article to some extent. please approve the article now since it's only a biography of an American actress. i hope you will listen to my request regard, W8town-studios

Draft:Absolute pressure leak testing
Thanks for the notification, i have added the reference section to the draft "Absolute pressure leak testing".

Is there anything else I can do?

Draft of new Wikipedia article
Hi, Hope you're well. I just amended and updated the new site I'm working on and would be grateful if you would take a look for me as you've done on the other sites I created, just so I know if I'm still on the right track. Thanks a lot for all your help. The article link is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Candice_Onyeama

Reply on your comment
Sir, recently you commented on page https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Draft:Nathu_Lal_Verma&diff=next&oldid=1042990583

I want to say that this is Autobiography page of artist who is alive.Please review this page.

I will be grateful to you Thanks Yours sincerely Ram Gopal Arta India

Please help (to correct/modify my article submission)
please let me know how I can change my content so that its not an advertisement type.

I am new to this and am sharing info on a product and tool that destroys data. WIKIPEDIA has numerous pages on products, companies and software massed to learn about them. Please help me modify, recreate or delete texts to comply to WIKIPEDIA rules.

I will be really obliged and thankful.

-shuja

Paid articles
I was paid to create a QUICK HR page

Paid articles
I was paid to create a Quick HR article

review request after action on comment
Hi there,

as per your comment on more reliance on press release, we have added further sources and remove most press releases except for places where launch news is to be cited. Please review and help

page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Bitraser

revision made according to comment
Please re-review and let us know. It will be really helpful. Please & thanks https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Bitraser

Banca Francesa (dice game)
It's a moving target.

Thanks
OK so your explanation on my status is very clear - much appreaciated. I'm the Communications Manager of the Observatory and have set myself the goal this autumn of fixing all our pages. We are a European institution and part of the Council of Europe so this is not a commercial activity. I'm going to follow your advice. Many thanks form Strasbourg EurAVObservatory

Draft check
Can you check an draft Draft:Kolkatar Harry

Reply to September 2021
Hello, I'm Hema Singh893. I had read your article in respect of Neera Arya. There are Minor changes are added in the article. The source of information is same that's why i forget to mention the same resource of information. Thanks for guide. I'll try to do Best in future.

Article declined
Hi Theroadislong,

Can you please guide me through what exactly can be done in the form of modifications and changes so that the article doesn't appear like and advertisement.

Article Approval
Hi there, I am writing this message because an article submission was declined by you. I have updated the article to some extinct. please approve the article now since it's only a biography of on the only all women metal band slave to sirens from Lebanon. I hope you can tell me where did I make a mistake and what am i supposed to do to amend the article. Kind Regards.

BugGuide
What do you mean, none of the content is supported by BugGuide? Look closer. It's there, on the guide page. Cerambycidfreak (talk) 20:53, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
 * The reference you have provided is a series of photographs which in no way whatsoever support the content. Theroadislong (talk) 20:56, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

Radhihudijan (talk) 21:37, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
Hello Theroadislong, The character is one of the most prominent figures in the State of Kuwait and belongs to the ruling Al-Sabah family. He is the direct grandson of Sheikh Mubarak Al-Sabah, the seventh ruler of Kuwait and the founder of modern Kuwait. He is also a businessman.

Dear Theroadislong,

what do you mean by notability cannot be inherited?

he is belonging to the ruling family in Kuwait and is also the chairman of more than 4 of the biggest and largest company in Kuwait and KSA and also Egypt.

what are things to add to this article? can you please help — Preceding unsigned comment added by Radhihudijan (talk • contribs) 21:45, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft: Margaret Klein Salamon
Hello!

You recently reviewed my submission for the wikipedia entry for Margaret Klein Salamon. I've included the notes below. If I take away the external links from the body of the article, will I be able to have the article published?

My notifications:

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was: we don't use external links in the body of an article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 8AYCiayni (talk • contribs) 17:24, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Sorry no, the external links being removed won't make the topic notable, the references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Theroadislong (talk) 17:29, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Needed to add same description
Pleasew don't deny, i needed to add that same thing. I can put it as source — Preceding unsigned comment added by JatinJalandra (talk • contribs) 17:30, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Your draft is copied and pasted from a copyrighted source and will be deleted, you MUST write in your own words. Theroadislong (talk) 17:44, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Request on 18:06:28, 22 October 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by JatinJalandra
It was not spam and i have now given citation for that page.

JatinJalandra (talk) 18:06, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Your draft was copied from here https://phree.co/about.html it was deleted and will be deleted again, you CANNOT copy and paste content into Wikipedia, sorry. Theroadislong (talk) 18:08, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Monenco Iran
It is not an advertisement, It is a well known company in Iran with a good experiences in glob, also have a Persian Wikipedia. what shall I do to keep this page? — Preceding unsigned comment added by AmRs1101 (talk • contribs) 10:16, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Content like "more than 1000 skilled and experienced professionals worldwide as well as the use of modern tools and technologies has been successful to render engineering and consultancy services to over 260 clients globally." is absolutely blatant advertising and has no place in an encyclopaedia article. Theroadislong (talk) 10:21, 23 October 2021 (UTC)

Mike Hall (musician) draft question
Hey there, thanks for leaving your question on the draft! That being said, "performed alongside" means that the subject played at the same performance with the associated acts stated in the draft while being a participant in his co-founded band, which is what I personally believe is being conveyed through the provided sources. Hopefully that clears up any ambiguity to the wording of that information.

However, if there is a better way to phrase that information, then I'm more than willing to change it accordingly. Thank you for your time! Thefarcry (talk) 13:26, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Playing at the same performance as other artists confers zero notability and is irrelevant. Theroadislong (talk) 13:28, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

Okay, I'll immediately remove the information regarding the associated acts the subject performed with as a band member. That being said, what's left should strictly be information regarding the subject's bass playing style, which I believe still falls under https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Notability_(music) criteria 1 & 7. Thefarcry (talk) 13:40, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

FYI
The user referred to here isn't currently blocked. --- Possibly &#9742; 18:06, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Whoops, thanks for the revert! Theroadislong (talk) 18:16, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
 * I can't see where they were unblocked? Theroadislong (talk) 18:22, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
 * hello old friend, long time no talk! That user had a 72 hour block applied October 16. I highly reccomend the gadget found under Preferences>gadgets>"Strike out usernames that have been blocked", as it shows in a glance who is blocked. That said, it comes with surprises when you see long-time users with a line through their names, as in "I can't believe they got blocked!" --- Possibly &#9742; 18:29, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
 * In the same spot, under gadgets, there is an option called "MoreMenu: add Page and User dropdown menus to the toolbar with links to common tasks, analytic tools and logs". It is highly useful, as it adds a user analysis menu, including Xtools, contribs, blocks and so on. It appears when you are on any user's page. --- Possibly &#9742; 18:32, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ Excellent, thanks for the heads up. Theroadislong (talk) 18:41, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft problems
Greetings, First of all I want to thank you for reading this message and giving me chance to correct my mistake. Am Naser Almeer a Qatarian Beach Volleyball player and I want to post my own biography and am facing alot of issues wich i dont understand i've fixed the references issue and i still cant make my topic live. i wish if you can help me and show me what to change exactly. Have a good day. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Naser Almeer (talk • contribs) 15:35, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Your autobiographical draft Draft:Naser Almeer has been declined again, the sources don't seem to mention you? Theroadislong (talk) 18:12, 25 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Duo Dasha and Vadym
Dear Theroadislong, i removed links. There is not zero changes. Tying my best to fix the issue)) Maybe you can give me advise how to fix page to it fit all Wikipedia standards? Thank you in advance! Best Regards, Ampearart Ampearart (talk) 16:25, 25 October 2021 (UTC).
 * This diff ] shows no such changes, you just re-submitted and the draft was rejected. Theroadislong (talk) 16:31, 25 October 2021 (UTC)

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Sannenkov (talk • contribs) 23:00, 25 October 2021 (UTC)

Cannot publish newly created post
Hi there. I am just wondering why I cannot publish my article. I am a new user and the owner of the Super Rifle brand USPTO Serial number: 90369953 and 90365957. I wanted to let world know that the ownership of the brand is changed and the product will be still available. I do not trying to post something against the policy. Please let me know how to overcome this issue. Thanks, — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sannenkov (talk • contribs) 22:42, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia is not a venue for letting the world know about your product, sorry. Theroadislong (talk) 07:06, 26 October 2021 (UTC)

Bali Balm Edited Source
Hello Theroadislong,

You reviewed and commented on the article I created Bali Balm Draft. I can understand and completely appreciate the comments that you made. Since then I have made changes to the article and wondered whether you would be able to review the page again please. I am also wondering whether you offer some sort of consulting service?? in which you could help and advise me on how to improve my article so that It can be successfully published onto Wikipedia.

I am fairly new to Wikipedia and It would be a great sense of achievement if I could get my first page published and then continue to contribute to the Wikipedia platform.

Would greatly appreciate your help/tips and it would be great to learn from you, I look forward to hearing back from you.

Thank you. --The-info-guide (talk) 15:43, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Ready to start a business, Theroadislong? Ha! S0091 (talk) 22:06, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Hahaa yes, we could call it "Lip Service". Theroadislong (talk) 07:43, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Love it! Of course after our "successful launch" offering all of our "solutions", we will need to start a couple more businesses so then we can become "serial entrepreneurs".  Its all the rage these days (at least according to draft space). S0091 (talk) 21:47, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Hello &, I have just read the above comments and I would like to sincerely apologise for any offence that may have been caused from my message. I think I may have misunderstood the workings of Wikipedia. I understand it is a complex process and just wanted to seek some help as I was previously offered help but in return for payment which I believe goes against Wikipedia guidelines.

Sorry once again for any offence caused, this was not my intention. I appreciate that this is not an easy job and I will take your previous advice on board to improve the article. Thank you.The-info-guide (talk) 12:32, 26 October 2021 (UTC)

Re: List of Cargojet Destinations
Hi Theroadislong,

You wrote, "we can visit their own website for this information, it doesn't require an article?". However, if you look at almost any airline article, under the Destinations subheading, you will find a link to a separate article that lists that airline's destinations. My guess is that it is done this way because the list of destinations can be so long that it would cause unnecessary clutter on the main article. By your logic, we don't need to have any articles such as "List of United Airlines destinations", or "List of Air Canada destinations", as we could just visit their websites if we wanted to see their destinations, no? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.177.240.207 (talk) 17:47, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Ok I could be wrong, feel free to re-submit, I'll leave it for another reviewer. Theroadislong (talk) 17:54, 26 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Faberlic
Hello. I translated an article from the Russian Wikipedia. There is also this article in the Polish, Ukrainian and Turkish Wikipedia. In Russian it was more voluminous, so I translated it from there. Will there be time to take a look ? Thanks ! 37.230.234.79 (talk) 13:30, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
 * The IP has spammed several editors with this request. Please ignore it. — Bilorv ( talk ) 15:25, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft:European Climate Adaptation Platform Climate-ADAPT
Dear Theroadislong,

I have further revised the Climate-ADAPT page, adding more reliable sources (EU laws, regulations, Communications of the European Parliaments, peer-reviewed publications, books and portals). Furthermore, I have renamed the page, in line with the official name of the platform, as mentioned in the EU Regulation documents. Here is the new link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:European_Climate_Adaptation_Platform_Climate-ADAPT Please note that the CLIMATE-ADAPT platform is also mentioned in the European Environment Agency (EEA) Wikipedia page, as the platform is part of the EEA website. Disclosure about paid contribution is also mentioned, as previously discussed. Would you please be so kind to let me know if this version is suitable for review, and if not, what change you would suggest? Thank you and best regards, Chiaramzztt (talk) 09:18, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Your draft is still entirely promotional, see the comments I left on it. Theroadislong (talk) 09:37, 29 October 2021 (UTC)

Page Review
Dear Theroadislong

I received your evaluation about my draft article I am trying to publish about the company GitScrum. Could you please help me answering the following questions so I can try to edit it and adapt it?

1) I read the competitors (Trello, Asana, Bootcamp) page and they pretty much follow the same standards, we used them as example of language, so we are finding difficult to understand: why ours can we not publish ours?

2) We have included references / sources to prove our tool and our users exist and are numerous; and have removed all adjectives that could be considered as personal evaluation of the product, leaving the text only informative. Even so, it returns as advertising. What else can we change?

We want to adapt to the rules, just would like to understand them specifically.

Huge thanks, — Preceding unsigned comment added by Denisemacielbr (talk • contribs) 18:18, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Please read other poor quality articles exist, secondly you say "we", user accounts are strictly for single person use, thirdly you need to correctly disclose your paid editing status. Your draft User:Denisemacielbr/sandbox is just blatant promotion. Theroadislong (talk) 18:50, 29 October 2021 (UTC)

Jonita doda draft edited
hello Sir Thanks for your initial help and guidance I have corrected all the mistakes and change the tone to a formal encyclopaedic manner for my draft. since it was my first draft I was not familiar with the Wikipedia format, I request you to take a look at the edited article and kindly approve it as Jonita Doda is a notable Indian actor.SourceRight (talk) 06:19, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Carley Shimkus
Am wondering if your opinion changed given the new press releases indicating she's the new full time Fox & Friends First cohort? Sucker for All (talk) 00:59, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Press releases are not considered reliable or independent. Theroadislong (talk) 07:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

working on entry - to show centrality of Ringelheim's work in Holocaust studies
Thanks for your feedback. Still working on demonstrating impact. Mononoke99 (talk) 11:38, 30 October 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mononoke99 (talk • contribs) 11:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

declining for not meeting threshold
Hello, thanks for your feedback. I'm still working on this page for a scholar who was indeed a major figure in the field of Holocaust studies. And also a new editor, meaning tons of mistakes! Thanks for your patience. Mononoke99 (talk) 11:38, 30 October 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mononoke99 (talk • contribs) 11:32, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Fashion Net draft updated with profile on BBC TV
Hello Theroadislong. Fashion Net was featured in 2006 on BBC (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IUWvATAqrIg). I've updated the draft and will resubmit.

Fnoll (talk) 10:31, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * YouTube videos confer zero notability, and it's a copyright violation. Theroadislong (talk) 10:37, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

New links on Fashion Net draft to BBC video and transcript
Thank you, Theroadislong — I've removed the link to YouTube.

The new links to the BBC TV profile and the accompanying website at BBC News are:

https://www.stigharder.com/media/bbc-2006.mp4 http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/programmes/click_online/4588408.stm

Fnoll (talk) 11:40, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Fashion Net article does not contain paid contributions
Hello Theroadislong. Thanks for your help. The Fashion Net article does not contain paid contributions and I'd appreciate if you could remove the tag. Before creating the draft, I did, however, comply with your requirements and declared a conflict of interest at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fnoll While I'm doing my best to be neutral, I understand the article may need to be edited by others. Scans of the print articles from the 1990s and early 2000s as well as the video have indeed been linked from the stigharder.com website. If possible, the scans could perhaps be uploaded to Wikimedia Commons and linked from there.

Fnoll (talk) 12:27, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Need help
This is Anwar Shakir Wazir, an Islamabad-based journalist. I would like to post my Biography (Autobiography). as I am working since 2001 as a Journalist, but nothing appeared on Wikipedia about this Journalist. i had tried once in 2013, today once again I tried but WP sent notifications that my draft has been rejected. kindly help me in this regard. Thanks. Anwar Shakir
 * Wikipedia is not a place to merely tell about something or someone, Wikipedia summarizes what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about a topic, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of notability. Please also review conflict of interest. Theroadislong (talk) 13:35, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Maringlen_%C3%87ika
for this article were to find a independent source to pass WP:NMUSICIAN
 * Sorry, but if this is a question I don't understand it. Your draft Draft:Maringlen Çika has 10 sources none of which are independent or reliable. Theroadislong (talk) 16:53, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Treacle
Not going to lie, I had to look that up. Molasses, now that I understand. :) S0091 (talk) 21:02, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Hadn't realised that it was called something different elsewhere! Theroadislong (talk) 21:05, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Same for me! Our lesson for the day, I guess. S0091 (talk) 21:09, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Article Rejection-Chantern15
Thank you for informing me about the cause behind the rejection, and where to go for help. Chantern15 (talk) 21:32, 31 October 2021 (UTC)chantern15


 * Or more accurately, article denial. Chantern15 (talk) 21:33, 31 October 2021 (UTC)chantern15

Fashion Net edit
Thank you, Theroadislong. I added the following to ensure this was not lost in the list of early media coverage:

In 2006, Fashion Net was featured on BBC by technology journalist Kate Russell

Fnoll (talk) 23:00, 31 October 2021 (UTC)