User talk:Thesubtleart

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Hello, Thesubtleart, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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The Subtle Art Draft Review
Great job in covering a wide array of topics and information within your article! The content was great the only concern I have for your article is tone and grammar which can easily be fixed in the following iterations of your draft :)

I love how you highlighted the popularity of the Selena Gomez tweet, I would make sure to include the proper grammatical citation when including tweets. When You only noted females as being involved in the protest, perhaps you should include a wider array of celebrities (in view, gender, the reason for their popularity, etc) outside of pop culture who were also influential in the march, such as politicians and other public figures. Please reread to fix minor grammatical and formatting errors (i.e. commas, extra/missing letters)

I would give Color for Our Lives its own section

What do you mean by “informal” and “formal” platforms? - sounds more fitting to an opinion piece

I would suggest stating the results of Quigley’s study and citing the research them rather than listing all of their names and results. It would make for a more cohesive read. Emilygess (talk) 06:29, 13 March 2019 (UTC)Emilygess