User talk:ThienLe17/sandbox

Page Feedback – I really like all the supplemental information you added, and think they bridge some of the gap of the original page. For the History section, I’m sure if the quote from Elizabeth Sweet was added by you, or part of the original page. But if it is part of your edits, I would consider shortening the quote, it’s quite a large block of text, and I think you can restate most of the points that were made in the text. For the section on role reversal, I would made make a statement about why certain cultures have role reversals in advertisement. Are these cultures with good equality between men and women? Is there any conclusion that can be drawn between cultures that do this with more frequency? Everything else looks great! Rbriggs1 (talk) 19:11, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

I think the Information you added was great, there were just a few grammatical and sentence structure issues that I found in your history portion. I will copy and pate the paragraph below and add my changes so that you can look over what I've done before finalizing your changes. One thing to note is that you need to be consistent with your past and present voice while writing.

In the 19th century babies wore white dresses because they fit better compared to clothing made in specific sizes and the white clothing was more convenient for changing diapers. The white color made it easier to clean and bleach because there were no existing technologies to wash colored clothes without fading. Additionally, genders were not assigned to specific colors during that time. An excerpt from 1918 of Ladies' Home Journal article stated that, "The generally accepted rule is pink for the boys, and blue for the girls. The reason is that pink, being a more decided and stronger color, is more suitable for the boy, while blue, which is more delicate and dainty, is prettier for the girl." In 1927, according to the leading U.S stores, Time magazine posted a sex-appropriate color chart, and parents were told to dress boys in pink in Boston.(This sentence is not clearly worded) Trends started to change around the 1940s, the clothing manufacturers decided that blue should be for boys and pink should be for girls. This change cam about to be able to distinguish babies’ genders by the two colors. The women’s movement that rose during the 60s and 70s pushed more on unisex, gender-neutral clothing. With the development of prenatal testing in the mid 80s, gender-assigned color came back, the parents could prepare “appropriate” color outfits for their babies before they were born Ezia9 (talk) 20:30, 23 November 2020 (UTC) Elizabeth Zia