User talk:Thine Antique Pen (public)/Archive 1

Radical Entertainment Layoffs; Support team (2012 - present)
"Following the announcement, Activision would be met by negative outcry. Much support would come from Radical Entertainment's Facebook and Twitter page, with fans calling the publisher Activision "Fucktivision", suggesting to slaughter Activision Blizzard CEO Robert Kotick,. Others would state that the only games the publisher makes that they care about is Call of Duty with them abandoning quality franchises like Crash Bandicoot, Prototype and Guitar Hero series. Some fans would suggest for Electronic Arts to purchase the studio, expressing Activision to be the worst studio in America rather than EA. [17] Some fans would take to YouTube to report on the shuttering of the studio.[18] Such news companies and reporting sites as CBC News,[19] the Los Angeles Times,[20] PC Magazine,[21] USA Today,[22] Huffington Post[23] and IGN[24] would report on the massive layoffs of the company."

This paragraph appears to be nothing more then needless insults and public opinion, it degrades the whole article if it where to remain.


 * Hi there! I reverted your edit as it was the removal of sourced content without an explanation. I'd suggest taking any concerns about that section to the article talk page. Thanks! Thine   Antique   Pen   (public)  23:40, 14 August 2012 (UTC)

Comments on your List of Kings XI Punjab cricketers list
The Rambling Man (talk) 16:53, 16 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Smallish list, doesn't need a lead of four paras.
 * Lead image caption needs a full stop.
 * "he group paid a total of US$76 million to acquire the franchise.[1][2][3][4][5]" five cites for one fact? See WP:CITEKILL.
 * "the IPL committee (BCCI)" what does BCCI actually stand for?
 * "They played their first..." new para so "The Kings XI Punjab team" or something, i.e. re-state the name of who you mean "they" are.
 * "In the second season of the IPL, they played 14 matches. They lost 7 of these matches, and won 7 of them.[12]." Merge, and perhaps " played fourteen matches, winning seven and losing seven"?
 * "In the 2012 season (fifth season)" perhaps "In the IPL's fifth season in 2012, ..."
 * "The stadium is 1,457 m (4,780 ft 2 in) above sea level.[23]" not sure this is relevant to a list of players.
 * James Faulkner and Ryan Harris are WP:DAB links.
 * Check the sorting on the table. If you sort by a col with non-numeric characters such as HS, the asterisk plays havoc with the sorting.
 * Ca should be under fielding, not bowling.
 * Check for hyphen misuse (per WP:DASH) in refs.
 * What makes Cricket Nirvana (beta) a reliable source?
 * Ref 2, the publisher is incorrect.
 * Times of India is a work, so it should be Times of India.
 * Same for The Telegraph.
 * Lead: I've cut it down to three paragraphs, but the list needs to still be expanded about three times.
 * Full stop: ✅.
 * WP:CITEKILL: ✅; Cut down to the two most detailed cites.
 * BCCI:, not IPL committee: Board of Control for Cricket in India.
 * New para: ✅.
 * Second season: ✅.
 * Fifth season: ✅.
 * Stadium: ✅.
 * Dab links: ✅.
 * Cols:.
 * CA:.
 * Dashes: ✅.
 * Cricket Nirvana is a frequently updated cricket site, and is owned and managed by a popular site.
 * Ref 2: Published by IPL 2012.
 * Times of India: ✅.
 * The Telegraph: ✅.
 * How are the changes? Thine   Antique   Pen  17:53, 16 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Good work, look forward to seeing it at FLC. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:57, 16 August 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Up All Night (One Direction album)/GA1
Thanks for reviewing, left comments on progress. Regards AdabowtheSecond (talk) 13:35, 14 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I'll be a bit slow on continuing the review. Thine   Antique   Pen   (public)  13:36, 14 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I was hoping we could conclude the review, because after sunday 19 August, I won't be able to access Wikipedia until friday 24 August AdabowtheSecond (talk) 15:58, 18 August 2012 (UTC)

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Nawabs of Bengal & Murshidabad/GA1
Hi, I am Tamravidhir! You are reviewing Nawabs of Bengal & Murshidabad currently, can I fix the problems now? Please reply on my talk page. thank you ! -- Tamra vidhir (২০১২) 13:21, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Why did you stop reviewing Nawabs of Bengal and Murshidabad? Tamra vidhir (২০১২) 11:10, 16 August 2012 (UTC)
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