User talk:Thinking On Rad

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Happy editing! WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 20:03, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Hypercompetition
I've done some editing on your recent extensive update to the Hypercompetition page. There are some specific issues that you need to address:
 * 1) Several of your citations are incomplete (one reads simply "von Clauswitz" with no further elaboration). Without full citations, other users cannot check the sources to verify the content. The citations that are incomplete are marked as "[full citation needed]]|undefined".
 * 2) Several of your citations are to unreliable sources such as personal blogs. If the material cannot be verified from more reliable sources, it may be removed.

Other issues that I've addressed that you should be aware of:
 * 1) Wikipedia does not include "Summary" or "Conclusion" sections as these rely on the article author to draw inferences rather than simply present facts.
 * 2) Wikipedia maintains an encyclopedic tone: sentences should not contain personal pronouns such as "you must do" or "you should do"; rather they indicate best practices in an impersonal tone: "best practice is to..."

I hope you can address the issues that only you can (better sourcing) and keep this other issues in mind as you continue editing at Wikipedia. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 20:03, 20 September 2021 (UTC)