User talk:Thismatters/sandbox

This is a good start, but I wonder about the sections. Is "research" good subheading. Might you organize it around pollution, temperature, rainfall or some other scheme that lets the reader know where things are heading? Good initial use of references; they will need to be cleaned up and polished. Better to do four paragraphs perfectly referenced and polished than more at lower quality.

Urbanature (talk) 20:46, 16 October 2014 (UTC)