User talk:Thitiparkarn Sirithatthamrong

ICCH224
Please complete online student training at https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students You must login and complete the three basic modules. After completion of these module, we will be able to see that you have edited three pages: Please complete this assignment by the end of today. Special:Contributions/Thitiparkarn Sirithatthamrong at this time shows that you have not finished: You need to be logged in, so that your contributions are recorded under your account. --Taweetham (talk) 07:30, 29 September 2017 (UTC)
 * sandbox
 * talk page tutorial

Special:Contributions/Thitiparkarn Sirithatthamrong at this time shows that you have finished the online student training at https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students. Thank you for completing the student training, please propose a few topics that you wish to write on Wikipedia. You should read all related articles on Wikipedia and draft your new article(s) or revision to existing article(s) in your sandbox. We are looking forward to seeing in your sandbox by Friday 6th October. There will be a few reminders before the deadline. Should you have any questions, please feel free to ask. --Taweetham (talk) 03:03, 30 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Your proposed topic(s)
 * Brief outline of your contributions to the article
 * References for the article and sources of media files (photo/VDO/drawing) to be used in the article.

This is a reminder that you have to complete your homework by Friday 6th October to continue with Wikipedia Education Program. It is best that you attempt it before the deadline and we can give you early feedback and directions. --Taweetham (talk) 00:08, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

You are expanding one section of an existing article combustion. Please make sure that you understand the whole article and WP:NOT before you move on. I suggest that you add references and a few paragraphs to the section before next week. --Taweetham (talk) 05:50, 7 October 2017 (UTC)

The section has no references. Please find appropriate references from the existing article and from elsewhere. We want to see a progress on this topic asap. --Taweetham (talk) 07:02, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

Please also make sure that you select reliable neutral references for the article. Read WP:REF for more information. --Taweetham (talk) 09:15, 9 October 2017 (UTC)

According to the timeline on course page, you are expected to contribute at least 500 bytes by the 13th October. It does not need to be perfect at this time if it is on your sandbox for new article. It has to be somewhat presentable if you are editing the existing article directly. Further optional tranings on the course page will help you. Feel free to ask if you have any questions. --Taweetham (talk) 10:01, 9 October 2017 (UTC)

Combustion
Please merge your draft in to the existing article. Be careful with WP:REF, WP:NOT and WP:COPYVIO. We expect to see your work in the article namespace by Friday the 20th of October. --Taweetham (talk) 02:46, 14 October 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Stackexchange should not be used for reference purpose.
 * 2) As I suggested earlier, you should read existing text in the section Combustion and find references to support the text before adding your own text.
 * 3) There is a high chance that your contribution will not be of the standard expected by the English Wikipedia.  Please study the policy carefully before you proceed.

A reviewer has been assigned to you. Please check course page for more information. The reviewer will be your mentor for this assignment from this week onward. --Taweetham (talk) 01:40, 15 October 2017 (UTC)

I have nominated your file Commons:File:Exhaust factsheet.jpg for deletion at Wikimedia commons. To get credits for this class, you will only upload media files you have created by yourself. --Taweetham (talk) 00:43, 19 October 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for your contribution to the article. There are a number of possible improvements: It is highly likely that your edits will be reverted if these problems are not addressed as soon as possible. --Taweetham (talk) 03:11, 21 October 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Make sure that you write in encyclopedic tone.  For example, "What is formed in incomplete combustion?" is not an appropriate section header.
 * 2) Make sure that you properly format your article.  For example, " Incomplete combustion reaction equation: hydrocarbon + oxygen → carbon monoxide + carbon + water" is not properly formatted.
 * 3) Please read article discussion page and try to address issues discussed there.
 * 4) Please read general information on the course page to make sure that you satisfy all aspects of our grading criteria.

You still need to work on #1 Make sure that you write in encyclopedic tone. --Taweetham (talk) 09:07, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Wiki link
I think you need to create a link for the word Carbon monoxide. Ppraaeww (talk) 07:11, 11 November 2017 (UTC)