User talk:ThomasFHill100/sandbox

Peer Review by Olivia Gower
There is a lot of good information here but there isn't any citation, which is problematic. From looking at the sources cited in your partner's sandbox page, most of the information seems to come from one source (middleawash.berkeley.edu). The source definitely seems reputable as it is a scholarly source, but because there is only one source the article could be seen as biased. So maybe think about finding other sources to use in addition to the one's you already haveCitations definitely need to be added and there are also a lot of terms that can be linked to their corresponding articles so the reader can access further/clarifying information about the term. I think the general structure is good but the formatting especially of the "Key Discoveries" section could be reworked to look neater. Overall the information looks good. There are just some little tweaks to be made.