User talk:Thomasgraziadio/Sexual ethics/Benberg11 Peer Review

Thomasgraziadio (talk) 02:27, 15 March 2021 (UTC) Thanks for the feedback. I originally added the First part about over population for the previous assignment, then wanted to take a different approach for my main piece so I'm sorry for that confusion. Main areas that I'm going to edit are: adding a citation for the part about the Chinese laws because that I agree that it should come with a source to back it up, and then moistly just going to clean up the rest and make it more clear and concise. And I might add a picture or two but there really isn't any media to add that I think would help the reader.