User talk:Thomricci

Sandbox Help
I would appreciate some help from an editor(s) to review my page in the sandbox before I submit for publication. Thank you. Thomricci (talk) 12:41, 11 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Hi, I have created my first Wikipedia article in my sandbox and would greatly appreciate if editors could review it and comment before I formerly submit it. Thank you. Thomricci (talk) 18:41, 10 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Hello there! You can get a quick once-over on your draft by asking for help on the AfC HD.  Simply navigate to that page and click on the big link at the top of the page to ask a question.  Make sure to follow the directions and include a url or pagename for your draft and why you would like someone to look it over before submitting it.  To be honest, not knowing where your draft is to look at it, your best bet is to probably just submit it and let a reviewer tinker with it.  Even if it is declined, you can still go back and fix the things that the review has laid out as issues that need to be fixed, if your topic is notable, and you can resubmit it as many times as it takes as long as you are improving it in between each submission. Happy editing! — &#123;&#123;U&#124;Technical 13&#125;&#125; (e • t • c) 13:53, 11 June 2014 (UTC)

WIBU-SYSTEMS AG
You asked for comments on the article. I hoped I could comment on it, so changed the template at the top to be an unsubmitted draft rather than just a sandbox entry. My apologies if that annoys you, it has not changed the status. Even so I was unable to comment there!

These are the comments I would make at review if I reviewed it today:


 * All inline links must be removed, please, and turned into references if appropriate, Wikilinks, or external links in a section so named
 * We require references from significant coverage about the entity, and independent of it, and in WP:RS please. See WP:42 I am not sure that your references meet those three criteria in all cases

I hope this helps. I suggest that you look at my comments, make the changes you wish, and submit it for formal review. Fiddle  Faddle  10:07, 25 June 2014 (UTC)

Inline Links
Fiddle Faddle, thank you for taking time to review my article. Can you explain further why I should remove all of the inline links?Thomricci (talk) 11:43, 25 June 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Wibu-Systems AG (September 18)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Wibu-Systems AG and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User_talk:Thomricci Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Worldbruce&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User_talk:Thomricci reviewer's talk page].
 * You can also get real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Worldbruce (talk) 01:26, 18 September 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Wibu-Systems AG (January 8)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Wibu-Systems AG and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User_talk:Thomricci Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Onel5969&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User_talk:Thomricci reviewer's talk page].
 * You can also get real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Onel5969 (talk) 16:59, 8 January 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Wibu-Systems AG concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Wibu-Systems AG, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:37, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Wibu-Systems AG


Hello, Thomricci. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Wibu-Systems AG".

The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply and remove the  or  code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you want to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by one of two methods (don't do both): 1) follow the instructions at WP:REFUND/G13, or 2) copy this code:, paste it in the edit box at this link , and click "Save page". An administrator will in most cases undelete the submission.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 22:11, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Wibu-Systems AG concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Wibu-Systems AG, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:44, 3 January 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Wibu-Systems AG


Hello, Thomricci. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Wibu-Systems AG".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the  or  code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing.  Onel 5969  TT me 14:09, 26 February 2016 (UTC)