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20:34, 22 May 2018 (UTC)20:34, 22 May 2018 (UTC)The dark of memory is an Arabic book written in 2016 by Ather Alnashmi, who is from Saudi Arabia, and this book shows how can violence affect children's characters and minds, how can they be lost and cannot decide anything even if they have gray hair, It thus shows the sides of the characters, how can you be so strong and show no feelings but actually he/she is very fragile and sensitive inside.

The book speaks of a boy who has more siblings but it was not a regular family either. His father is very angry and nervous the whole time while the mother is very stubborn so the father chose violence to shout her until leaving the house as a choice to run out of his life. Eventually, the mother makes violence on her children as a revenge on her husband. One of the boys grew up and became a man but with the children mind and thoughts, He decided to love and marry a woman who is opposite of his mother, He would her be kind and have the tenderness that he missed in his mother. He found her after a while but she was disappointed and he was also disappointed by his unstable character when everything he thought about was why his mother was like that? Why did she shout at them when it was the father's fault? And why did she beat them back and not the one who hit her? Mashhour is his name, after a while does he start thinking is she really my mom? , is she stepmother or what kind of mom she is. He always asks himself if my mom does not care about me who cares about me, If my mom does not like me who will like me and the last question he asked himself if my mom does not love me who's going to love me?. His relationship with Mountaha who is the woman he loved has been cold and then they separated but he still loves her and tried to get her back but she did not accept.

The environment of the book started black by the toot sound of the heart machine, The protagonist was in bed the whole novel. trying to remember his life while he was in the coma after he forgot all his memories due to a car accident. But after he remembered everything and began to distinguish who visits him but the one he wanted to come was Mountaha did not ever come. At the end of the book while it was still black in his eyes came a person he did not like or loved, came along with very heavy steps and holding great worrying, took his hand and hugged it with shaking hands and then he knew that it was not Mountaha it was the person who never took his hand once, it was his mother pater on him while he is trying to run out of the darkness.

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KylieTastic (talk) 21:30, 22 May 2018 (UTC)

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joe deckertalk 23:36, 25 May 2018 (UTC)