User talk:Tiearamoore/1855 California State Convention of Colored Citizens

Apparently were supposed to use this. Just letting you know I have pier reviewed you.

--Alexbattledust (talk) 20:25, 12 March 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review
The lead seems good to me from what I read. The structure is clear except the first paragraph I'm not sure if the instructor wants a title for the paragraph? Each of the three main sections appears to be equal in the amount of text provided and the tone is neutral. The sources look legit from what I saw when clicking their links and reading the references. The main suggestion I have is don't quote as many times as I saw because if my memory is right, Wikipedia doesn't like quotes to be used. Also, it has about 2 quotes each section excluding the first seems to be too many in my opinion. Other than that seems to be good as far as I can tell. Dwhittaker74 (talk) 03:08, 13 March 2020 (UTC)