User talk:Tiffanylujan/Heterotrophic picoplankton

External review
Hello Tiffanylujan, I am a PhD Candidate at UC Davis studying freshwater ecotoxicology. I volunteered to review wikipedia articles such as yours. I have reviewed the original Wiki entry and compared this with your updated article. It is clear that you have added much needed information and detail, congratulations! Here are my suggested edits:

Formatting issues

References

I notice that there are some formatting issues with your references section that appear as "Check date values in: |date=". Please see the help page to correct this error. Headers There are also some formatting issues with the sizes of your headers. Generally, the main topic has the largest font size, then subcategories would be listed in smaller font sizes below, or as separate sections. To reduce the size of subheadings, add additional "=" before and after the title.

Content

Standardize naming conventions

You have "picoeukaryotes" and "Pico-bacterioplankton" listed as subheadings. I suggest keeping these in lowercase with no hyphen.

Wording choice

I suggest defining what you mean by "seasonal preference" in the first section. Does that mean they reproduce more quickly in those seasons, or produce larger individuals or have a more rapid growth rate, or...? Also, in the second section, please add the Wiki link to "sequencing".

Overall, great job!

Sastinson (talk) 19:57, 16 April 2021 (UTC)