User talk:Tiger33055/sandbox

Homework due February 9, 2015
Zooey Deschanel
 * Approved. Josef Horáček (talk) 05:01, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
 * You found good sources, but make sure the citations include the dates and issue numbers for each periodical. Without that info, the sources are hard to track down. Also, you can delete the "citation needed" template where you did provide a citation. Josef Horáček (talk) 03:06, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Homework due February 20, 2015
History of Saturday Night Live (2000–05) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tiger33055 (talk • contribs) 03:42, 20 February 2015 (UTC)

Homework due February 23, 2015
The structure of the article is well balanced. The first two sub sections maybe could have been combined into one section about up and coming actors that joined but it works the way it is as well. The information is in the right order. It has very good flow and balance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tiger33055 (talk • contribs) 23:01, 22 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Go ahead and write the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 03:03, 24 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Your draft is a great start. Some comments: 1. Delete the last few sentences starting with "A breakdown." They are helpful, but not what you should do in WP. 2. The phrase "exciting and maybe controversial sketches" is problematic. "Exciting" is just empty praise and not neutral. "Maybe" should also be deleted. 3. Spell out short numerals, like "five." 4. Proofread for style. Josef Horáček (talk) 08:32, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

Homework for Thursday, February 26
History of Saturday Night Live (2000–05)

Saturday Night Live, also known as SNL, is an American late night comedy and sketch television series. Seasons twenty-six through thirty are the five seasons that occurred between the years of 2000 to 2005. Season 26's first episode was aired on October 7, 2000. The last episode of Season 30 was aired on May 21, 2005. The seasons were filled with both returning stars and new faces. Some new faces brought the appearances of actors such as Horatio Sanz and Jimmy Fallon. Tina Fey went from behind the scenes to on screen, as well. In following SNL tradition, there were many action packed and controversial sketches. Sketches ranged from the 2000 U.S. presidential election to the fallout from the 9/11 terrorist attacks. There was also controversy over the frequent cast turnover. From actors being fired and rehired, new cast joining, and several cast members leaving. Working on a live show, there also allowed for some mishaps to occur. One of the most memorable and controversial instances was Ashlee Simpson's lip synching incident. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tiger33055 (talk • contribs) 19:00, 3 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Great job. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:03, 10 March 2015 (UTC)