User talk:Tightbowtie/sandbox

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Ready to go! Chronophoto (talk) 01:06, 20 February 2018 (UTC) (course instructor)
 * Overall, this looks good. However, for information coming from Graf (such as the effect of testosterone on his sexual orientation), add “According to Graf” and similar phrases, rather than stating it as fact.

Peer Review This looks really good! Making the clarifying statements mentioned above is certainly important to do before going live, and I would also go through again and link out some more things (British Army, New York City, etc.) just to make it even more connected. Overall it looks good and I enjoyed learning from this page. Thanks! MrahGR (talk) 19:10, 26 February 2018 (UTC)