User talk:Timdy/sandbox

Alex2596 (talk) 22:41, 25 October 2021 (UTC)1. What does the article do well?

The article introduces the topic well. 2. What changes specifically do you suggest overall? Have sections about each technology. 3. What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? in the sections explain the vulnerability that the technology protects against. 4. Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? I should make a new article about my topic

1. What does the article do well? Has great explanations of the encryption technologies. 2. What changes specifically do you suggest overall? Have more with tap to pay as a suggestion for new technology. What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? Elaborate on the technologies a bit more. 4. Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? The specificity is good, mine needs more elaboration and it is clear why those technologies are significant to the subject of encryption. Galaxy67 (talk) 23:06, 25 October 2021 (UTC)