User talk:Timmyhuanghe/sandbox

Peer Review
Lead Section: My peer review: Personally, I don’t understand what is cap carbonate at all before I read this Wikipedia page. This lead section gives me a brief and clear definition or explanation on what cap carbonate is. I think the author did a pretty good job on leading the reader know what is going to be talk about in this article. It also shows me that the cap carbonate is the result of snowball earth, which is good to know! Nice job.

A clear structure: There are two paragraphs written in the author’s article. The first paragraph stated the characteristics of cap carbonate, mainly speaking on δ13C. The second paragraph explained the formation of cap carbonate. It is good because it’s really good to know such knowledge of cap carbonate. I have some comment on the article: will you explain the relationship between cap carbonate and the “out of control of ice albedo”, it still seems to be confusing to me. As the formation of cap carbonate, I think the author gave the pretty clear and brief explanation, good!

Balance coverage: Two aspects listed in the article are both very significant for carbonate. I don’t think there is problem on the present content of the article. However, I am also very interested in the function of cap carbonate in the biogeochemical cycling, hopefully more information can be added on this.

Neutral Content: Generally speaking, you did okay on keeping the content neutral. However, I doubt on if the phrase “very clear” is an appropriate phrase to appear in your article. Personally, I suggest you to just to start introducing the formation of cap carbonate, do not state that the explanation of formation is “clear” or not.

Reliable sources: First of all, it looks like all sources cited in thie article are very reliable since they all have doi numbers. Many references are related to Neoproterozoic glaciations, which was just briefly mentioned in your article. I would suggest maybe have more references on viewpoints you addressed more? Yliu3089 (talk) 15:09, 29 March 2019 (UTC)