User talk:TinyAtoms/sandbox

Peer Review
Hi, I made a few minor edits (added "the" or "a" in places) Also to a "citation need". Have you thought about breaking the Research section into subsections? with headers? It is a bit hard to read, although I'm not a chemist so that be be the problem. Could her research be described in more laymen term? Not all of it, but maybe the first paragraph of the research section. LittleDart 17:10, 22 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Thanks, I appreciate the feedback! TinyAtoms (talk) 16:49, 28 August 2018 (UTC)